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writing is decent but what turned me off is the goblin part, very stupid as no goblins would be slave and that goblins hate wizard and will never act subservient so in essence, it's just another hp fic that paints goblins as slaves or nice ones that can't fight back or whatever. this itself is a major turnoff and in the end is nothing but other fics that misconstrued the goblins, at least it's not as bad as this I found Griphook: "OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE REMEMBERS MY NAME! HAVE ALL THE THINGS, LORD POTTER GRYFFINDOR SLYTHERIN HUFFLEPUFF RAVENCLAW ROCKEFELLER!!!"

I know you have no motivation or time but will this story be continued or be left in the dust?I hope you continue thjs

Great overall and I liked it so far and looking forward to more but author needs improvement regarding his understanding of the power system in dxd. i believe it goes from2 wings - low4 wings - mid6 wings - high8 wings - ultimate10 wings - Satan12 wings -Rizevim or Sirzech level Satan or super devil

I like it so far but It need some improvements regarding the writing. the sentence don't run smoothly and are cluttered and need more commas to fix it. it can also be improved more by refining the choice of the words that are used. and regarding the character, I like him so far but his design is lets say overused because we already have a fox and it would have been better if the Author went with a ten tailed wolf in my eyes.

generic fic with author not being able to get his characters personality right such as Lucy blushing when she'd never blush when she just meets mc.Author writing is bad and can't even be bothered to improve it.author also can't seem to take criticism well with how he regards it as complaining and how the commentor should watch og show if wants to complain.in the end, is just a regular WN author that focused on generic fics instead of quality