I love writing though I have never really shared anything before. Married with children .
Great and fun read . You showed the emotions of your characters perfectly . I love how the king got back at the mean men who were out to embarrass the prince .
Fantasy · funkiller_562
This is a fun read. I like that the king taught those mean men a lesson. The prince just needs some confidence. you did a great job with showing his emotions.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1. Violet eyes
Thank you so much
Fantasy · Katie_Torres_3147
I was on chapter three before I even realized it. The flow of the story is great. It’ easy to read and the author does a great job. I can’ wait to learn more about the conflict between the two clans
Fantasy · RizzEditions
Sorry my phone auto corrected as I posted but I’m glad you understood my point
Fantasy · Sage_Tranquil
I find tintriguing intriguing. I like how the author leaves many questions while making those questions seem mundane to the main lead. Very well done
Sorry it took me so long to leave a review. I have been unwell
The first chapter grabs your attention. You can’t wait to read more . I love how the heroine jumps into action calmly ignoring the ones just standing about being jealous. Great start
Fantasy · Novelistilia
I could not stop reading I fore see some very heated arguments as well as some hilarity. I already am looking forward to the heroine coming out of her shell and becoming a force to be dealt with.
Urban · Scarlett Jane
I love the flow of this story, even as the character learns about her abilities. She doesn’t lose her innocence or becomes arrogant. I like how her guide lets her struggle on her own instead of just giving her all the answers immediately. It shows her development and growth.
Fantasy · LadyE101
I love how you can feel the despair of the character in the first chapter. The author perfectly portrayed his need and pain. It’ well written and draws you in quickly. Well done
It’s such a charming story . I like how the author introduces the lead. You get the feeling that she is well liked yet know she is something beyond what is seen.
Fantasy · Missy_Castillo
Your plot and characters are strong and well defined. It’ going to be interesting to see how the main changes as he falls in love . You have done a great job .
Fantasy · Emmy_Thomson
I am interested in learning more about Jade. Such an interesting character. you captured his emotions perfectly. You have done a great job showing his frustration and mixed feelings.
Urban · Lovelydaisy
I like the character development and pace of the story . It is written in a way that it’ easy to picture the story as it unfolds before us. Good job .
Fantasy · Chrissie_Swift
Thank you for your kind words. I will be adding more about the world around them. In my first book I elaborated a lot about the world. Was told by an editor it was too much . So I scaled back in my second book. Got the same response . So this one I was trying to do a little less but I think I’ve gone to far so I will be editing some chapters and adding.
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Urban · binni_seon
I was a little confused in chapter one but as I read on things became clear. Jade seems to be a complex person and you have done well showing his frustration with his situation. Keep up the good work
Urban · Porcupine_
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Great and fun read . You showed the emotions of your characters perfectly . I love how the king got back at the mean men who were out to embarrass the prince .
My boyfriend can control the darkness
Fantasy · funkiller_562