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That was amazing 🤩🤩 and for the chapters that I have read so far, I could already start to imagine what a good story it will be. Keep it up author.
Great blurb and after reading the blurb, I'm curious about the story as it is not ordinary mafia story. Since from the blurb, I imagine it will be a gem searching kind of war. Good job, Author!🤗♥🥰
A nice start for story and amazing settings and plot, best to keep reading and feel like I will like it later as chapter goes, so keep it up.
to be honest, this isn't the type of story I am into, but even I was amazed by how good this was, can't recommend this enough! and this is coming from someone that typicly doesn't enjoy this type of stories! great job author, wish you good luck!
The author gives a perfect-descripted like story and gives a very exciting feeling in the story. I like the way it moves and I can't help but to continue reading.
Overall a great read! I could really feel the tension build up right at the start, which served as a great hook! Not to mention, the grammar was also great, making it an overall smooth read. I think there are definitely lots of questions waiting to be answered and lots of exciting people to meet! The Gem 💎 really seems like a hot commodity ahah
Amazing story. Loved it 😍😍 Novel so far is quite intriguing. Characters are very well written and described. I can see potential in this novel. This is one of the best Mafia story on WN so far. All the best
I love Mafia's stories. The start of your story is excellent no doubt. You well managed your plot. Your leading characters are the best. I love your writing style.
This is a pleasant book to read, no doubt. I usually don't find myself hooked to mafia books because they're super common and a lot of people flock to write them these days. But this book offers something unique that actually brought a special taste to my mouth. I must say the starting chapter is pretty good, legit. It just jumps into a dangerous scene and I personally love books that do these. I'll detail my review below. Synopsis: Honestly, not the strongest imo. It's not bad either as you don't flood it with information that makes it sound like a prologue like many do these days but it could use some more flavor. Your synopsis fails to highlight just how good your book actually is. Writing Quality: Top notch. Fabulous grammar, especially when compared to many books on this platform. Maybe there are a few issues with punctuations and tense usage like when to use "is and was" but otherwise, it's amazing. It's FAR from unreadable so if someone complains about grammar, they're lying. I graded this a full 5 though I would have put it at a 4.8 but WN doesn't allow that so take the 5. You earned it. Stability of Updates: Not been with the story long enough to say but from what I'm seeing, seems decent. 5. Story Development: Also one of the book's strong points. The story isn't too fast or too slow. It's perfect in terms of pacing and the author does well in bringing around small hints, foreshadowing, and information. 5 Character Design: Well done. The descriptions are fluid and creates the image perfectly for the reader. It won't leave readers guessing about any details of the characters because everything is more or less done for them. 5. World Background: Ah... This cost you the full 5. I'm not sure if I missed anything. If I did then let me know and I'll literally delete this review and rewrite it. (I read fast and sometimes space out while reading, thinking about stuff so it's possible I missed). But I didn't see where much was said about the world where the characters are in. Descriptions seemed to be lacking in this area and so I gave this a flat 4. Overall: Awesome book. Readers who love mafia stuff, this is it for you. This adds even more elements to the mafia genre which just makes it a lot more unique and enjoyable. The author has great potential and should keep striving to do better. Kudos and keep you the good work! Score: 4.8
A very interesting story that you don't wanna definitely miss out, what can I say, the characters and background is well written, descriptive ability of author is also top notch. At same time it's easy to understand and have good update speed. Can't wait for more chapters 😊😊
The story started really nice. The way you wrote those paragraphs are just *chef's kiss* noice! I didn't get lost while reading it, also I got entertain reading every chapter. There's nothing more I can say, this such an interesting story that I would literally recommend to my friends.
Writing Quality: The way that it was written was easy to understand and the narration was easy to follow. I don't see any glaring issues with grammar and punctuation. Stability of Updates: So far so good. Story development: I've read the first three chaps and so many things happened already. The pacing wasn't too fast nor too slow, just okay. Character Design: I couldn't say much since I haven't gone that far yet but based on the three chaps I've read so far, the protag was supposed to be missing some sort of memory. [?] I'm not sure. But she has an air of mystery around her. I'd like to see more of her in future uploads. World Background: I don't have a clear picture yet but I think she's in a mansion or something. [?] But considering I'm still on the earlier chaps, I guess the good parts are about to come. Conclusion: I love how the author started with something suspenseful and presented us with one of the [many?] problems our protag is gonna go through in the future. The way the author foreshadowed was done in a way that it doesn't turn into an exposition. And I hate it when that happens. So in short, I recommend this book.
The author gives a perfect-descripted like story and gives a very exciting feeling in the story.
For a romance story, it is surprisingly thrilling, the drama, the mystery and the suspense of it all really lures you in. I expect many more interesting chapters from this story. In summary, it's an exciting read.
The author is great at describing scenes. I can feel the emotions of the characters. The story is undoubtedly exciting, and I am adding it to my library. Keep it up.
The opening story makes me curious about who the man was and why was the case. But altogether the story seems interesting. Will it be the romantic or action type more? Anyway keep going on.
Your character and their development are fascinating to read, and I'm inquisitive about how the character will develop more in the future. I enjoy the genre but would like to know more about what the college in this story is like?
Author, you have done a great job by keeping us on our toes. You have built mystery at every corner. We want to know more about Anna, Lucas Chrystal and even Mara and her weird cousin Dave. You have created characters with such a sensible touch that we have to care about them. You have achieved greatness in your character development, but the world building is lacking. I do want to know about their dormitory, the college. Also please update and continue the story. It is a great one. Also I would update the cover. The picture is great but the title can be more prominent at the top and in a daring font. Make sure the author's name is added in a more catchy font as well. Cheers, Ra!
I just start reading it and for the first chapters I have read so far, I can say this story is overwhelming. Keep it up writer and can't wait for the next chapters. 🥰🥰
Hi, Everyone. It's your Dear Author. Thank you so much for clicking my book 💖💕🥰, I hope you enjoy it. Please rate, review, and share with your friends. I will highly appreciate your comments, support, and votes💖💕💖 your thoughts fuel my passion to keep on writing. Have a whale of time reading it, I'll always keep you updated.