Webnovel Author: heyitsbluejay

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describe the scene and the movements of the characters, this allows the reader to infer the emotions of the characters instead of you just stating them

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heyitsbluejay

1yr

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you need to start a new paragraph when someone new speaks.

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SINFINE-Kairos(Completed)

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heyitsbluejay

1yr

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more telling not showing, and you need to space out your paragraph because the huge wall of text makes it hard to read

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SINFINE-Kairos(Completed)

Fantasy · AndyFanfare

heyitsbluejay

1yr

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your telling not showing with the first paragraph.

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heyitsbluejay

3yr

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