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2020-03-31 Joined Global
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ch 0 1 Witnessing A Miracle
Fantasy · Ready_
My thanks for the kind words
ch 18 Desperation
Fantasy · Ready_
The concept and ideas seem pretty nice so far (11 chapters), the story seems to set up to be one of vengeance with a hint of dark powers, though, the first few chapters are held back by the constant switches between first and third person, an issue which is resolved later on but the problem still remain at the very start of the novel, I would suggest a overhaul of the chapters with this issue. The writing isn't bad by any means, but it isn't fluid, in the sense that there are some mistakes that are pretty much impossible to miss, which brings the reading to a stop and hinders the flow severely. Another minor issue, which might not be one for everyone, I personally find the chapters a bit too lengthy, not certain if its just me imagining things. If I am not delusional, then cutting the number of words to around 1000, no less, would be beneficial. All in all, this is the author's first book by the looks of it, the few problems I noted are only natural and will most certainly be erased as they get more experience. Look forward to the future. Also, since I know the author worships Esdeath:
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Well, it is a fairly basic fantasy world and as for the system, it is the somewhat extensive but standard system I use for most of my stories with one, nothing too special about it, XP, skills and such, although it isn't very prevalent in Draconic Madness, as with most of my short stories
ch 0 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
Fantasy · Ready_
I don’t have any good image for the dragon unfortunately, what do you want to know about the world exactly?
ch 0 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
Fantasy · Ready_
I left it up to interpretation, so my opinion is as good as anyone else’s, I personally consider him to be human
ch 0 8 Gone Forever?
Horror · Ready_
The Hunchback Of Notre Dame (1996) By Disney
Hellfire
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Thanks for the nice comment, don’t worry I don’t plan to go on any hiatus before this book is over
ch 126 Emotional Support Elf (ESF)
Fantasy · Ready_
I see it is taking another direction this time
ch 0 4 My hell!
Horror · Crak
I have read many stories in my time, as well as given my fair share of review, never have I ever done so out of the free will of my very own brain but anyhow, today I will review 'Tales Of Isfet' by unknown author 'slowpokeChaos' who apparently doesn't put capitalization at the start of their own name, proof that they don't think much of themselves and, by extension, of their own work. However, this story has brought me something marvelous, much like many other stories I enjoyed reading through it but unlike with the past stories, this one brought enlightenment to me, I have been able to shed my former body like a catterpillar (literally), I have advanced to a greater state of being. Thank you author! As for the rest, I guess it's fine.
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Not in the typical sense
Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
Fantasy · Ready_