LionessLover - Profile

It got the Likes because it'*s true, little fanboy.

Boring (extensive food and meal descriptions - is this another cooking show clone? boring long dialogs - a style invented to add word count while not having to write much story, grammar issues (mixing of tenses).

What is wrong with YOU! It is beyond stupid to accept such ridiculously low quality. I'm not an English native speaker and had to learn it too, and I once too had to write (academic) papers in English for the first time. So I know what it entails. Only with complete disregard, laziness and not doing your research do you end up with such garbage grammar. If YOU want to excuse such abominations of horror texts, please feel free to do so. Just don't be so ignorant and to demand this of others too.

I forgot one other thing: The percentage values of all the skills. Percentages are useless without knowing what the base is. I have no idea what the base is for your percentages. If accuracy is increased by 1% - compared to what base? If you increase the accuracy of bow shots for a random non-archer person (and your MC is not skilled in archery at the start, chapter 1 says it was his fathers bow and the reason he had it was because his parents died in a car crash, he himself appears to be unskilled in archery when it all starts) then even 100% increase (of a tiny value!) is insignificant! What if you double the accuracy of somebody who had no accuracy to begin with? It means nothing! On the other hand, if you mean "percent of complete perfection as base" then the upper limit of all percent-granting skills will be 100, plus you have the problem that somebody who was skilled to begin with will have a higher base than what your skill grants, and you also have an issue when two perfect (lvl 100, 100%) skills collide. The percentage-granting skills are not thought through, either they are vastly underpowered, or the power depends on the starting base of the person so skill levels are extremely individual and lvl 10 for two people could be vastly different if they start from different bases, or... well, what IS the base for your percentage skills?

Oh and about the grammar issues: I too had to learn English as a foreign language. Still, my first written creations were a lot better - I know because I still have them, early academic papers. The "secret": When unsure CHECK and research before committing to a sentence or even just a word (like your "vigilance cameras" - well, at least you get points for ingenuity). After only a few chapters you'll get noticeably better. I don't see any such improvement in your writing even after fifty chapters, so I know you did nothing of the sort. When I wrote my first papers I spent considerable time for every single paragraph, sometimes sentence, because I researched the grammar. Today you have it easy enough by using the Internet.

Go back to school kid, and learn SOME grammar at least. Your writing is an insult. Your refusal to learn is revealing. With just a few afternoons of studying a few grammar rules, or even "cheating" and using a grammar checker, would solve 80% of the issues. There are just TOO MANY: This is not about some typos, this is about stupidity and ignorance.

Please kid, go back to school and learn very basic grammar. I'm quite forgiving but THIS is WAY too bad! And your assumption that a *venomous* snake is *poisonous* just adds to the impression that this author is quite lacking in education.

You are right. If I could give -1 I would but I have to settle for 1, sorry.

All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.

Terrible, characters lacks character, motivations, everything repeats itself again and again (first corrupt royalty, then corrupt main sects, then corrupted church). Every time when there is some problem "system" will drop solution out of nowhere. Antagonists are one-dimensional props just to be killed. Most of the things doesn't make even elementary sense. If i didn't know any better I would think it's classical trash transmigration xianxia novel from China. It's full of communism and celebration of low class while middle and high class is always corrupt and evil. Of course except "good" revolutionary leader which happens to be MC, who punish evil nobles and leads lower class to bright tomorrows... There is nothing novel or interesting. Dropped it after around 300 chapters... Just for you to know MC became king in only 88 chapters, after that it's inconsequential idiotism of "hard work"... Start was mediocre (before he became king) after that it dropped in quality even more. Do not waste time.

Is there actually a limit(er) preventing one from writing more than one review? I think I already wrote one for this weeks ago - testing.... testing....