The Familia Head was Reborn as a Wolf in Another World

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ARedFox

I can't say too much but I'll write what I know. Do take it with a grain of salt. I'll leave a TLDR above a longer explanation if you actually care. It is also important to note I haven't unlocked any of the locked chapters yet. TL;DR - A fun story with only a few issues. 1. Writing quality needs some work. Somebody else complained about the venomous/poisonous part, so I won't go into that. There are issues with plurality and a few grammatical errors. Putting it in some program, even a google doc, would help significantly. There are also paragraphs which run on the long side. 2. Update stability. I can't really say anything here because I haven't been paying attention long enough. I'll leave it at four because the author started the year with lots of chapter but now hasn't updated in 4 days. 3. Story development. It isn't anything that gets my heart racing but it isn't bad. There is a good amount of level skipage that gets summed up in a few sentences, but I don't dislike it. It works well. There is one or two plot points which feel somewhat forced, but it isn't too bad. 4. Character design. Again, it isn't anything too special, but it isn't bad. No real development has happened yet, but the story just started. I do wish we got some time to listen to the character think or have thoughts about things that aren't related to fighting or what is directly around him. 5. World background. I found this to be a little lacking, but just a little. There are a few unexplained things and under explained things. Sometimes it feels like the author forgot to explain it or just intentionally ignored it. See the 7, 8, and 9 in the portion below for more. Personal issues/concerns/hopes: 1. It got contracted rather early at chapter 37. I personally think authors should wait till chapter 60 unless it's super good or a must read. This so far is neither. It would be more understandable if this actually had a rating at the time of me writing this review, but it doesn't. It also has less than 35k views as of now. 2. I also hope the mc doesn't fight or really get involved with the flying things by/on the cliff (if you read it you understand). I don't want to read another story with that. 3. I also hope he doesn't meet his old comrades. While it wouldn't be cliche, I just can't image myself liking it. If he had been with them the whole time or we got their perspective occasionally I wouldn't mind it, but we don't. 4. The author doesn't use the authors comment/note area at the end of chapters, which isn't bad, but I wish they did. It makes it more enjoyable for me. It also means I have no idea of their plans going forward. I also haven't seen any replies or likes to others comments by the author. 5. I am worried about stability of updates. The chapters started at the start of this year, but the next chapter hasn't been posted in 4 days. There is also no schedule given by the author which increases the uncertainty. 6. I hope the author gives a average word count, even if it's just an estimate. It's not a big deal, but it'd be nice. Below might contain very minor spoilers. It won't ruin the story because these things are very common in other stories about other worlds, but I still thought it important. . . . . . . . 7. I think that assess should at some point if not now, give the tier and rarity of what's being assessed. The mc fights a lot, but I feel that being an upgraded form/existence (if you read it you'll understand) is too common for the things he fights. Either that or the things his species is really weak. He struggles quite a bit and it would help with both story development and background if we could know how common and strong what he's fighting against is. 8. I hope at some point we find out just how rare things are. Knowing something has been designated as rare doesn't help much if we don't know how many levels are above it and how rare it actually is. 9. We don't know how levels worked and I wish a brief explanation was given. For example, we don't know if you receive a reduced amount of exp for killing things at a lower tier than you. We don't know how much levels affect stats. We don't know if killing things at a higher tier grants more. We don't know if the rarity/strength of the creature matters for exp. We don't know if exp is only granted to the person who gets the kill. We don't know generally how much exp is needed or how much the mc needs. Etc.

LV 11

LionessLover

Please kid, go back to school and learn very basic grammar. I'm quite forgiving but THIS is WAY too bad! And your assumption that a *venomous* snake is *poisonous* just adds to the impression that this author is quite lacking in education.

LV 14

private_ryan

this story has so much potential especially because he's got human and monster memory and feeling can't wait for more this story brings a smile to my face and makes my mind run wild and can't wait for more

LV 2

Jayvee_Magno

MC's character/personality doesn't fit the story, he was supposed to be a leader of an underground organization but i didn't see any circumstances where he displayed his personality fitting for an underground leader. Especially considering that his organization was a massive one in the past, unless it was not him who developed it, it would be understandable. I think his right hand man when he was still a human would make the perfect MC in this story.

LV 15

Silver_1_Phoenix

This novel starts off great, I mean superb. The MC levels up very quick because of his system. But, the biggest problem (and the reason I gave leas stars), is because the MC gets stuck in a cavern and then the story becomes confusing. And just, when I had a grasp on the caves, then come the apes. Which is confusing because the authors talks anout the trouble with people, and then apes taKe up the focus. And now, I don’t know who is the MC. Is this novel about wolves or chimps? I thought the MC would’ve been with his pack by now.

LV 4

Alshiera_Imara_18

If this is at all similar to the Danmachi verse then I'm all for it. Fill word count joke: What’s the difference between a teacher and a train? The teacher says, “Spit out your gum,” but a train says, “Chew chew!”

LV 10

Davecastle10

A good story with an interesting plot point but the side stories of other animals, e.g the gigarillon is just boring and distracting from the story's plot.

LV 3

Red_baron

Le novel est nul est le fameux "parrain" a la même personnalité qu'un MC générique. En plus l'étron et payant. ....................................................................................................................................

LV 15

Mortality_Sold

Loving this novel, got to the latest chapter and almost wanted to cry! Thank you author for updates! I will be lurking around for the next update!

LV 15

ElReyDooKIE

just started reading and am very interested in the route the author will be taking in the future. i recommend anybody who see's this review to try it out [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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TurboEldricl_2

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LV 15

Mortality_Sold

I feel like I did a bad job on my first review. I came across this story looking for something to get my mind off of reality. (And possibly to get away from rebirth novels that have lovey dovey romance). As a few others may have pointed out, there are some grammar and spelling problems but I am fine with that. Heck my grammar sucks and English is my first language. Besides that, I'm hoping for some insight on character development, some interesting things have currently been going on with the MC's mental state, I will try not to spoil anything since I'm up to the latest chapter. The development of the story is interesting, maybe later some more background can be established but the MC is pretty much trying to survive and the present is indeed important and I hope others keep in mind that MC is still in a dungeon. I'm also glad history on wherever our MC is isn't really explained yet, leaving a mystery and excitement to know more. At some point I need to sit down and re-read all the chapters, but I felt this story needs some more good reviews.

The story development is great. Its a fun book and a fun story. But the grammar and spelling mistakes are very annoying to adjust to. I hope the author can be better. I'll be looking forward to it.

LV 15

DaoistLBupgb

this novel is an all around terrific read focusing on strong character development and steady pacing of the overall plot. while at the current chapter 68 there is limited world building, that is mostly due to the current location the story is occurring in, and of the world building that has been done is of excellent quality.

LV 2

Last_Lost

Excellent book, surprising having a monster memory unlike the majority of the novels I've read. One of the big problem is the slow ch updates and this cliffhanger when his about to become an alpha when it switch to the POV of the ape king. Keep up the good work.

LV 3

ghost_wolf25

Ihu the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same hugging you 😅🤣🙂😃 on the same time I don't have ah

LV 10

Xerophryx

Surprisingly good story so far, and a shockingly well developed world background! I was drawn to it because the title sounds like an absolute mishmash of all the genres. the MC jumps to a TON of assumptions, and barely has a goal beyond "SURVIVE", which is fine, but it definitely feels lost. The MC has remained unnamed for a long time, and he seems fine with it. I just wish he had a name is all. Author tends to reuse phrasing a bunch, especially obvious when speaking about the "ape type" and "ant type" creatures. there are some paragraphs where the phrase shows up 3 or 4 times even when clarification was simply uneeded. It feels almost lazy, unfortunately. the inability to communicate with anything due to being a wolf makes it so the story only has internal dialogue, and I think that's holding the story back. at first I thought this story was going to be a ripoff of Reincarnated as a Slime, but its not! it rather quickly sets itself apart from that story, though it ends up sharing a few themes simply by nature of its genre. the writing is the main problem with the story. its lacking in diversity, but it makes up for it in creativity! The scenes are described well and each new location is as unique as the last with its own collection of fauna and flora. I have high hopes for the story, and I really hope the story gets moving here and the writing improves!

LV 14

Zuzu15

I found this story interesting because the MC is a magical beast that peaked my interest 🤔🤗 I got bored with the same storyline hopefully this will keep me interested 😊

LV 6

josesintora

Very good story, it started a little standard, but then it started to improve the story a lot. I like how I know the story of the monkey king is unfolding. The only big flaw I see is that I feel that the MC's personality is poorly defined or not very appropriate to his circumstances. But getting that very good story.