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These chapters are seemingly getting better in quality. Keep up the good work.
ch 15 Blood on her lips
Fantasy · redlady
Dina was dogwalked in this encounter. I am curious about how things will go forward.
ch 13 Hell , I am fuckable !
Fantasy · redlady
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One bad thing I will point out is how insignificant a lot of these scenes seem to be. The chapters jump from place to place with little semblance of importance to the actions thus far. This is a byproduct of the chapter ls being too small and lacking of content.
ch 10 ARE YOU CRAZY ?
Fantasy · redlady
I am quite favorable about this chapter. I hope the good work continues.
ch 0 7 She is the queen
Fantasy · redlady
There are a few typos in this chapter. I wanted to comment directly on it, but I'll let you know of their existence.
ch 0 6 We don't talk anymore
Fantasy · redlady
Angelo's characterization of not harming humans is an interesting one. I wonder what kind of test will occur to clash with his resolve.
ch 0 6 We don't talk anymore
Fantasy · redlady
A solid chapter is a good thing. It isn't bad, but it could use some work. Overall, it gets the job done when it comes to publishing on webnovel. Webnovel recommends smaller chapters, but you don't want to keep cutting and jumping scenes. In reality, a lot of the smaller chapters would be much better in a longer chapter.
ch 0 3 He is the devil
Fantasy · redlady
This paragraph seems to be missing a few key words. I recommend looking over them.
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Fantasy · redlady
It is a compliment. Your story has an unique feel to it.
ch 0 2 Her ideal boyfriend
Fantasy · redlady
I'm glad that you caught that. Ever since they updated the mobile app, my editing process has been flawed, and minor mistakes like that slip through. If you manage to catch any others, then pointing them out would be helpful. I'll try to find a way to better proofread and edit away many of the mistakes.
ch 60 The Young Master Of The House of Blois!
Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei
This is a really solid chapter. You do good work with your smaller chapters
ch 0 3 He is the devil
Fantasy · redlady
This section could use some cleaning up for greater effect.
Seeing nothing but the destruction of our surroundings and hearing nothing but the explosive sounds as those arrows pierced the ground, we really panicked when the Magic-Barrier of the strongest Sorcerer in our group got broken.
Fantasy · UelUel
This chapter wasn't too bad all things considered. I expect greater improvement as we continue the story.
ch 11 Necromancer x Light-Eater
Fantasy · UelUel
I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I did have a secondary project, but it is currently on the shelf. I do plan on continuing this one for the foreseeable future.
ch 35 The Banquet's Final Confrontation!
Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei
This book overall is rather solid. it does require some knowledge of the cultivation genre to pick up certain aspects, but the style is relatively easy to understand. It could be better at flushing out the characters as things progress. The writing quality is a big plus for this one, and the world in itself is rather creative in my eyes. I'm curious about what kind of characters and story will ultimately come out of this one. This one is worthy of occasional revists.
Records Of A Seeker: I'm An Ant
Fantasy · 1000000_Lives