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Zhoa_Fei

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This book overall is rather solid. it does require some knowledge of the cultivation genre to pick up certain aspects, but the style is relatively easy to understand. It could be better at flushing out the characters as things progress. The writing quality is a big plus for this one, and the world in itself is rather creative in my eyes. I'm curious about what kind of characters and story will ultimately come out of this one. This one is worthy of occasional revists.

Records Of A Seeker: I'm An Ant

Fantasy · 1000000_Lives

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Commented

To be declared Queen of the vampires is one thing, but commanding the others as a human will prove to be difficult. Especially

ch 16 The truth

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Commented

These chapters are seemingly getting better in quality. Keep up the good work.

ch 15 Blood on her lips

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Commented

Dina was dogwalked in this encounter. I am curious about how things will go forward.

ch 13 Hell , I am fuckable !

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Replied to redlady

I sent you a friend request. I am Nakumaraitami

ch 65 Onward to Oa!

Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!

Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Replied to redlady

Of course! Send me your discord, and I'll send you a friend request.

ch 65 Onward to Oa!

Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!

Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei

Zhoa_Fei

1mth

Commented

One bad thing I will point out is how insignificant a lot of these scenes seem to be. The chapters jump from place to place with little semblance of importance to the actions thus far. This is a byproduct of the chapter ls being too small and lacking of content.

ch 10 ARE YOU CRAZY ?

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

2mth

Commented

I am quite favorable about this chapter. I hope the good work continues.

ch 0 7 She is the queen

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

2mth

Commented

There are a few typos in this chapter. I wanted to comment directly on it, but I'll let you know of their existence.

ch 0 6 We don't talk anymore

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

2mth

Commented

Angelo's characterization of not harming humans is an interesting one. I wonder what kind of test will occur to clash with his resolve.

ch 0 6 We don't talk anymore

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

2mth

Replied to redlady

A solid chapter is a good thing. It isn't bad, but it could use some work. Overall, it gets the job done when it comes to publishing on webnovel. Webnovel recommends smaller chapters, but you don't want to keep cutting and jumping scenes. In reality, a lot of the smaller chapters would be much better in a longer chapter.

ch 0 3 He is the devil

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

2mth

Commented

This paragraph seems to be missing a few key words. I recommend looking over them.

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My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

3mth

Replied to redlady

It is a compliment. Your story has an unique feel to it.

ch 0 2 Her ideal boyfriend

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

3mth

Replied to K_Log

I'm glad that you caught that. Ever since they updated the mobile app, my editing process has been flawed, and minor mistakes like that slip through. If you manage to catch any others, then pointing them out would be helpful. I'll try to find a way to better proofread and edit away many of the mistakes.

ch 60 The Young Master Of The House of Blois!

Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!

Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei

Zhoa_Fei

3mth

Commented

This is a really solid chapter. You do good work with your smaller chapters

ch 0 3 He is the devil

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

3mth

Commented

I will say that you have a unique style of writing in the third person. It is as if you are trying a Shakespearean, poetic tone as you write. I do think that your descriptions can suffer, but I will see going forward.

ch 0 2 Her ideal boyfriend

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

3mth

Commented

What's happening? Is she going to heaven?

My vampire enemy

Fantasy · redlady

Zhoa_Fei

5mth

Commented

This section could use some cleaning up for greater effect.

Seeing nothing but the destruction of our surroundings and hearing nothing but the explosive sounds as those arrows pierced the ground, we really panicked when the Magic-Barrier of the strongest Sorcerer in our group got broken.

ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf

Fantasy · UelUel

Zhoa_Fei

5mth

Commented

This chapter wasn't too bad all things considered. I expect greater improvement as we continue the story.

ch 11 Necromancer x Light-Eater

ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf

Fantasy · UelUel

Zhoa_Fei

6mth

Replied to UelUel

I'm glad that you are enjoying it. I did have a secondary project, but it is currently on the shelf. I do plan on continuing this one for the foreseeable future.

ch 35 The Banquet's Final Confrontation!

Da Boyz and I Got Isekai-ed and Now I am Trying to Conquer The World!

Fantasy · Zhoa_Fei

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