If you were to put ‘looking’ instead of ‘looked’ You would have to put ‘were’ infront of ‘looking’.
After I finished cleaning his wounds in silence, I walked out of the chamber to let him rest. The guards were waiting outside and looked terribly worried.
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
Hazels maids don’t have multiple husbands that why i think is was writen in singular form instead of plural form.
"His Highness is fine," I told them and then walked away. I went to the garden and sat on the swing. Even though I was outside in the cold breeze, I still felt hot. I touched my neck where he had kissed me. I didn't know that a kiss could affect someone so much. Ylva and Lydia would sometimes tell me about their passionate night with their husband, how only a touch could make them weak and wild. I always loved hearing their crazy stories. If it weren't for them, I would have been so lonely.
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef