Webnovel Author: Ve_speaker - Fanfic Collection

Yeah I understand. I'm still kind of new to writing and didn't know if I should have an mc or not. This story was honestly supposed to be me testing the waters and getting some feedback on how to improve. I'll keep the story the same If you're wondering but the next chapter will still be about Waneta. I need to finish this arc and not leave it open like this. And Waneta wasn't some chosen one like Anakin. The father just wanted to keep her from freeing her mother. I'm just going to make another story as Waneta as the mc starting from a child to an adult. Many of you probably don't care about this which is why I may post that story on another platform. I don't feel like seeing negative reviews just because they don't like the character.

Why do so many of you want 40k in the starwars universe? I have nothing against it and it's a great concept but that would literally be overkill if even a single fleet went against the starwars universe. Only people I could see giving them a hard time is Luke and Abeloth. And thanks for liking my story. It means a lot.

Wow. Didn't think my story would be considered one of the three decent stories you found. Kind of makes me glad you think my story isn't totally trash.

If you don't know who the MC is than I must have done a good job. There was supposed to be no MC to begin with but than Waneta came in and I picked a liking towards her. I'm thinking about just keeping the story as I had it and making a different story just on waneta going from her childhood to an adult.

This is basically the mortis arc when Anakin, Obi-wan, and Ashoka met the god like beings being the father, son, and daughter. It's a long story but Waneta is caught in the middle of them because of her being the daughter of Abeloth (originally the mother) I don't know if you care about all this but the battles will return in two more chapters. Master chief and the Arbiter will have more spotlight in them.

If anyone sees this please answer this question. So you all prefer the story switching pov every now and than or have an actual mc? I didn't know if anyone liked reading stories like this so I was actually thinking about transitioning her to be the mc. If you liked it like this though I'll keep it like this. But Waneta will still have a major role in this story. Planning to have chief and the Arbiter in more conflicts as well if your wondering.

Switching. There really isn't an mc in this story.