Webnovel Author: OrIgIn - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Its good. Its kind of slow, but good. I like it.

Essence of Blank

Absolute Erasure

Existence Manipulation

No.

No, this does not happen like this and that is not our thought process. If you wear dirty or worn out clothes, then you can expect to be judged as poor or some variation of that. Celebrities are certainly not like that either. Well, not all of them are like that. Just like not all people are good people. This level of racism and clasism is not so open, thought about, or even processed like that. What you WOULD find, is the classic making fun of an asian person's language, how they look, maybe assume they are a poorer class for the more racists bunch. But this level of racism is not mainstream or widespread. It is dramatized for the novel.

Diviiiiiiine Simp!

Awesome story, however, thats not how it works... for Superman. Magic affects him as does any other normal mortal person. Meaning that Superman or even Kryptonians don't have any special weakness to magic that causes them to be more vulnerable to magic. It just affects them the same as any normal person. So, the strength this little girl has should not have any effect on Tut's skin, as his skin is near invulerable and the little girl only has 'little girl' strength. Now, if the hands and attacks of the little girl were somehow the enhanced with magic, then yeah awesome. Just a little pet peeve. Anyway, awesome story.

run-on sentence.

Maybe? Perhaps. But they would have to whole-heartedly believe that they are almighty. That's kind of hard to do when your own FATHER is the almighty. But then again it could just be one of those things where maybe they're not that powerful to achieve almighty status. So, I don't know. Maybe? Perhaps? Possibly?

carpet in a classroom? as the floor? heh

that isn't a spell. It's literally nature trying to correct for Amara's true immortality.

So you should've done it in much better way than this. Like seriously, "MC needs to tell these two because he has done something they can't explain and they believe MC is the devil or something and MC wants to clear that misunderstanding with just this." I don't know, to me, that just seems kind of forced. I can't think of a better way to write this necessity, at first I was like, "just make the duo already suspect MC is Adam", but then I was like, "Mc is like a ten thousand years old and he knows better than to give away himself to a bunch of literal children compared to him." And so I am stuck as to what advice I should give, I just feel like the situation felt kind of forced.

Immortals are completely and unconditionally and truely immortal. That's why Elena and Stefan exist, as a way for Silas and Amara to "die". They don't need blood to survive but they do need it to function. And ONLY function. They don't have any superhuman physical abilities and ONLY have their psychic powers. They are Immortal Psychics that need blood to function, but not survive. That's all. Without their psionics, they are normal human beings that can be "killed" by a gun. But then they would revive. Like instantly. They also heal basically instantly. Lucifer is also immortal, not like Silas and Amara as Lucifer can be killed, but he is an ANGEL. The strongest Angel.

Did you know that the Angels from this Universe have a trait called Self-Actualization. Its described like this in the fandom wiki: For angels, it’s more prominent; since an angel's physical and spiritual being are one, how an Angel sees themselves will Self-Actualize on their physical body. This is why each Angel has a unique divine superpower that correlates to their personality, and why angels cannot impregnate mortals unless they can see that mortal as the parent of their child. This trait can be a powerful strength or a crippling weakness, depending on how the Angel sees themselves.