Wtf! Make it more interesting or I go to your mother, Lazy
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Prodigal Son
Fantasy · Lazy_Pen_Master
This world is a cultivation world, and Mandarin is the common language there. "Xiao'Er" is also very common name for a girl ('Er is added to show intimacy P.s: "Xiao'Er" is not a name, rather a nickname.
"Xiao'er" the young master looked at his maid and signalled her to take out the money.
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Wonderful thing you have done, fellow Daoist. I bless you with success.
"To make sure that no reader believes in stupid things such as reincarnation and transmigration, and does stupid things in reality..."
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
What about the other 40%, Sensei?
I was still a little annoyed that my first World Travel was disrupted like that.
Anime & Comics · The_POZ
here
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Anime & Comics · Belteragon
well, here's a piece of advice. To make the MC seems more intelligent and cunning, you don't have to write entire paragraphs of his inner monologue and plans. Just make it seem that the MC is just average while prove his intelligence by his actions. It is weird when he's bitching in his mind while telling the readers about his plans. It would be better if you give a plot twist to some actions which are done normally, Example: "Please turn on the TV" A Dumb MC said. "(Name of the side-character)" The Smart MC closed his eyes and said, "Turn it on." Here, He MC did not specify the thing, and left it to others to think. To me, an intelligent MC would never reveal his plans in detail. He would just give orders according to the situation after giving out the basics of the so-called plan. P.S, A smart person would never interact with so-called cannon fodder to prove his point or just to face-slap them. ... That's it.
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Anime & Comics · rickert_61
But with Black-red outlines and fire instead of ice.
Kosuke nodded at the answer and sighed, "Same here. Mine is also not willing to fight."
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Gojira
"It's just that Gojira is not willing to participate in such meagre battles. What about you, ~Dattesu?"
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Fuck-you! You've successfully ruined my life... 177013, 215600, 230053, 215600. 228922, and please, never search 4299. You've been warned. If you want to stay innocent, never, I repeat, never search these unholy words. Warning: These shits are ****ed up
And also I felt proud thinking that I saved fellow males from her clutches as I prevented them to have heartbreak from this greedy girl.
Anime & Comics · Charan56
Maybe a color change?
[Picture of Kosuke's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
At first I was thinking this...
[Picture of Kosuke's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
this?
[Picture of Kosuke's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Is this one good? or other
[Picture of Kosuke's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Gojira
[Picture of Kasai's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
I did upload it once... Maybe there was someinternet problem
[Picture of Kasai's tailed beast.]
Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
This looks cool.
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Anime & Comics · WhiteMooN
Ok, you made it interesting, I wont go to your mother
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: New Goals
Ascension To Divine Throne
Fantasy · Lazy_Pen_Master