Hi
i really like the premise of the story and i love the main character and the fl but my one complaint is that we barely see them, most chapters focus on other people and we go like 30 chapters without having the mc’s pov or seeing him, i understand it’s for world building but we barely see the mc excpet when he’s with zephyr doing missions and even then it’s still mostly other people’s pov, we don’t know his plans or his ambition, and barely having his pov makes him seem like he’s progressing somehow too fast but too slow at the same time. So yeah i recomend we see more of the mc and if you’re planning on having the romance anytime in the next 300-400 chapters make the fl and mc interact more by sparring or training together so that the romance is not sudden. Really love the novel tho!!!
Fantasy · Raos_IOI
ik right i stoped reading it after that chapter, but now im continuing just because im in love with these two😥😥😥
Urban · Bright Phoenix
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i really like the premise of the story and i love the main character and the fl but my one complaint is that we barely see them, most chapters focus on other people and we go like 30 chapters without having the mc’s pov or seeing him, i understand it’s for world building but we barely see the mc excpet when he’s with zephyr doing missions and even then it’s still mostly other people’s pov, we don’t know his plans or his ambition, and barely having his pov makes him seem like he’s progressing somehow too fast but too slow at the same time. So yeah i recomend we see more of the mc and if you’re planning on having the romance anytime in the next 300-400 chapters make the fl and mc interact more by sparring or training together so that the romance is not sudden. Really love the novel tho!!!
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Fantasy · Raos_IOI