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In the midst of a ruined forest, due to the result of the clash between peak powerhouses, a body of a man lay. He was known as the 'Evilest Villain', the worst man ever born in humanity.His body was full of wounds with a spear piercing his heart. However, even in his final moments, he was calm and collected, with his usual cold face.
The only thing on his mind was, "Forgive me, I couldn't keep my promise to you."
He closed his eyes, ready to begin his eternal slumber in the darkness.
Suddenly, a blue light appeared, with ancient text that read, 'Do you want to turn back time, my child?'
He laughed and said yes.
| Fate Devourer System |
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[Authority: Deus Time Control (Rank ?!?) used]
[The Goddess of Time wishes you the best].
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Somewhat new power system that integrates power systems from a bunch of novels, I like the back story and world building, more importantly I love the mc’s personality atm, author of possible could you make is such that the mc is a womanizer? I think it matches his personality and if he seduces the daughters of the elite family’s he could get massive benefits and such,end of the day it’s just a request this novel has serious potential either way, hope you don’t drop it😀
Ah!!!! I like Asher's character so much.... he is first villian mc that i am extremely satisfied with, he is cold ,calm, indifferent, rational, calculative ,have high IQ and seriously I love that he is not ignorant , or have 0 EQ and thinks with his lower body.... I sincerely hope that there will be no romance and really wish the artist that you introduced is just someone that asher cares about ( but not romantically) . You know after searching for so long , I have finally found a mc who is so much to my liking ( currently 100%) that's why I particularly don't entertain the idea of even slight romance ( but I would still mc 🤫🤫93% .... umm no 95% ) . I also like mc 's system . Now that if talk about novel's quality.... it is very good . Author writing quality , world background designs, the thought he put behind the interactions , expression and dialogue are really well well detailed , it's just that authors updating speed is but slow but all is very good I am so satisfied that I can't wipe off the smile from my face
Review at ch 40: The novel is average till now, so i give it 5.8/10 overall. Regression has become a common theme now, and even villain regressing has been done, albeit much lesser. The character of mc, who is the villain, sets this story different from others. And i didn't liked his character so much, effectively decreasing my opinion of overall novel. He is shown as ultra emotionless, yet arrogant boy, who is somehow genius and so his arrogance is justified, according to author. And i dont like such characters. The way he treats his sister, it's not good. Such mc could have been okay in other stories, but this is a regression story, and regression means making past better, not repeating those mistakes. When author tells the story of first timeline, how mc became such a villain and how his sister became so distant, that might explain his character better. Still, I have to praise author, his writing quality is good. And if he keeps on improving, and gets a better story, author can write much better.
the story started out great with the MC personality. The side characters and even the world building was good but the grading scale of his system is really weird? For example, he has the SSS rank skill to absorb stats but we nearly see him use it. He made an entire new sword style but it consumed his earlier swordskills and still have to cultivate it from the beginning. At this point why even have a system when all we see is him getting nerf over and over again. As of chap 73 it has become even more of detriment to him than help. The system is the only thing bringing this novel down from 5 star to 3.5 for me
i am not sure main character is really the main character anymore. his screen time is so little and chapters are too short so i can't tell. the pacing is slow asf.
stop with the fking backstory we get it Asher was dumb and his life was a sob story, I'm at chapter 435 and it started at 415... we don't wanna see this pathetic part for so long, 5 chaps is good, 10 chaps are max but bruh it's been 20 chapters and it isn't even ending...
Just wanna say, for people looking for explanation or smthn, idk why the author didn't just say it directly, but in one of the privleged chap at around 14th nov, he said he is deathly ill, so just wait and see ye, an illness that bad might have some side effect, or in a better scenario, it's school related stuff, it's near the end of the year anyway, so let's not bash my guy too much, and hope he doesn't die early or doing the dirty drop, im really addicted to his work, and i need the supplier to be alive.
don't worry guys if the author stops writing this masterpiece we shall just break into his house and capture him then lock him up in a bunker and make him write the chapters until the novel is completed for his freedom.[img=recommend][img=strong] Everything aside this novel is great I seriously want more chapters and some romance... 💗 HAHAHAHAHA mind my words btw author. [img=Feeling it]
is this really dropped? if so, huge disappointment.. i was thinking the story progressing smoothly and we will soon get to the excited part..
Dear author, my suggestion would be to write the chapters in advance before start posting again. That way, in case of emergencies or other unforeseen circumstances, your audience won't be left hanging and you won't risk losing your audience.
It was good at first i liked the protagonist and I didn’t even have any problem with the female lead but the author messed up the story, I don’t know but the more i read the more i skipped so I dropped.
At the start I wasn't feeling the Mcs character too much because not a lot was told about his story and background, but after reading 200 chapters a lot of stuff is starting to add up(especially his attraction to Allysa which, I can't lie, was annoying at first). I think what I like about this novel and what separates from other villain novels I've read is the fact that the Mc is not hypocritical and is not doing the villain thing as an act, it's just who he is. The only thing that I didn't like too much was how the author came out with too many mysteries at the start of the novel which made me think he was just trynna nerf the Mc. The amazing story and writing quality will take this novel to the top, just need to work on that upload schedule though😅
Initially, it had a good start, and I thought I found a treasure, but it slowly began to degrade in my opinion. The story IS good, but it also has its fair share of downsides. The MC is honestly kinda dull, and his personality is usually about engaging as a brick wall. In addition, there's not really a sense of excitement or fulfillment the reader feels when he accomplishes his goal. I never really find myself thinking: "Yes! He succeeded at *blank*!" It just kinda happens and the reaction is usually "Oh...cool." There's also a fair bit of edginess and cringe. With the MC being so AMAZINGLY HANDSOME that it tends to get mentioned every other chapter if a new female shows up. I stopped around chapter 80 where the story constantly jumped around to many different characters that honestly weren't very interesting.
The biggest liar is the author . Stop lying and give a false promises. He literally kill his novel by himself
After the kalvas gala arc I feel like the writing quality went down, plus author kept on saying he’ll release more chapters only to not release said chapters giving many of us false hope.
I love the way mc take decisions. I hope in the future He goes through emotional development.he develop feelings.
76 chapters so far, really great story, great characters and it doesn't get boring at all I like how the author keep triggering our curiosity to keep us reading.
I read till chapter 308. I gave the story enough chances to improve but I'm done. First is the writing, a lot of redundant information or paragraphs, example: two events with intertwined result happen at the same time and author covers one event first, which is all good, but author after finishing one side, he goes into detail about the other event. This brings me to the second point, too long and too slow, author takes chapters to cover events and repeats things a lot while the progression of the story is atrocious. MC and other characters are all right but they don't feel real, author just keeps repeating "his indifferent red eyes" that it just feels like author wants to force a characteristic to MC even though it's clear that he's indifferent, no need to reiterate a million times. Another point is how childish this story is, and I mean by that is the problems that occur are not thought through properly, it just feels like author got it on the spot and wrote it, which caused loopholes.
I am a newbie author and its my first novel. I hope you guys call out my mistakes and we can perfect this story together. If you have any tropes or events you want me to add or any loopholes you find in the story do tell me. Bye Have fun reading <3 And pls read the end of story summary.