Webnovel Author: TyrantPharaoh - Fanfic Collection

NEVAAAAAR! Don't worry I just had a couple of presentations and exams that got me busy the last couple of days. A new chapter is coming today. Just bear with me this week and starting June 1st I will be totally free so chapters will keep rolling.

Okay, first of all, you can not compare the style of writing in an original novel to fanfic, cuz in fanfic I can depend on the fact that most of the world-building is already done through the original book/show. I only focus on developing my character and his Kingdom. He did not rebuild any city, he just renamed it and barely added a few statues instead of Harpy's and renovated the existing walls or so. I also explained clearly why he is going North, what are his plans, motives, and so on. I added dialogue to keep the story flowing and fun as others said it was a bit dry in early chapters. When I went too much into details in the first few chapters everyone commented they need to see more dialogue and fewer details, so I amended my writing style and most seem satisfied with the style now. I honestly don't think it is fair that you summarize almost 30K with two sentences, but hey that is your opinion and it is fine. I do not have the arrogance to believe no one will dislike my story, so that's perfectly fine. Btw, I read at least part of it and dropped it after being tormented by the obvious lack of knowledge or bias when recounting the history of the Ottoman-Byzantine conflict, it also had so many historical errors that I could not bear, but for a non-history reader, I guess it could be fun.

Thanks, dude, you are a lifesaver.

Dacey Mormont

Sirius Stark

Just wait and see, hehehe.

Sigh!! I explained it to you a couple of times already. North has the Wall, the Night King who could lay waste to the whole world if he conquered the North and added all population along his march to Dorne into his Night Army. North is also his roots and seat of power of his ancestors, It is much larger and has water sources when compared to the desert-infested Dorne. The climate issue can be dealt with mass production glass to make greenhouses, by then the North will be the largest, will have massive food production, will be the most fortified at the Neck and Moat Cailin, and also will present a double threat to Westeros, from North and South. Attacking any of Tyrosh, Lys and Myr, will basically guarantee a response by the alliance from all the other free states and this will prove a tough nut to crack for the current Winter Kingdom. Attacks from West from Tyrosh, Lys and Myr, from the North from Volantis, Pentos and possibly Braavos, from the East through Qarth, no matter how strong the Winter Army is it will crumple when fighting on so many fronts, and their forces will be stretched so thin to defend all these sides. Also, he has no standing in Dorne so he will have to invade it which will bring forward fierce retaliation from Westeros and Robert no matter their disagreements with Dorne they will not stand by for a foreign invasion. When compared to the North which will validate his claim in Westeros as the King in the North as a Stark, while also obtaining the biggest Kingdom with no bloodshed. War is not won by numbers only the quality of the warriors is a big element in that world. in the second century AC in the HOUR of the WOLF, Cregan Stark marched South into King's Landing crushed a rebellion, and put a new King on the Iron Throne and ruled as Hand of the King for one night brought peace and then swaggered back to Winterfell and no army could stand in his path. The North has so much potential that does not make sense to waste. Dorne is a bad choice either way, if North doesn't work Sirius would unify Essos instead and control the Stepstones to siege Westeros economically and crush them in a long battle of attrition, but this will weaken his future alies against the Night King.

Great ideas, for now, communication is done with gyrfalcon as mentioned before through Alaric the Spymaster as he has a team of wargs who tamed gyrfalcons which are far more robust and also faster than normal ravens in Westeros, they are also controlled by the council giving more control to the King than in Westeros as there is no Citadel or maesters who could virtually control the information that is given to the King. Propaganda is fulfilled through his instilling of ideas like Nationality and loyalty to the Winter Kingdom and their status as chain breakers guarantee the loyalty of the freed slaves, who are like 80% of the population of the previous Slaver Cities (According to Canon). Also, the economic development through glass making and steel factories in Memphis, along with the shipyards in Heliopolis, the flourishing trade in Alexandria are what guarantees the welfare and thus the loyalty of the people as they can't make such a great living elsewhere. Please notice that in the times of Slaving in Essos safety is what matters the most for the freed slaves, a strong army is what guarantees their status as free men as the Winter Kingdom is the only place that guarantees that for them, so their loyalty stems from both their economic wellbeing and also the apparent strength of their Kingdom as the strongest military power in the area guarantees that their lives, social status, money, and properties are safe. If you re-read you will notice these points implied. I do not opt for the obvious explanations as I got feedback from some readers that this disrupts the flow of the events. Thank you for your awesome advice. Promise will try to explain it more as the novel progresses.

Either way, he will have to fight all seven because the King of the other six will fight him if he took the North.

It has to be that way. While the Winter Kingdom has a strong army it is not yet strong enough to fight the collective armies of the Seven Kingdoms, Also he needs to avoid bloodshed as much as possible for the Battle of Dawn against the Night King.