this is honestly relatable ....
I nudged the door open with my foot, holding a big box of my belongings. Looking at my box to make sure I still had everything inside, I took a few steps forward. Thinking about how my boss spoke to me before firing me, I felt the tears threatening to burst from my eyes.
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Urban · hidingpanduh
what an impressive work, I have not finished all of the chapter but, truthfully the writing was so good, it was clean and easy to understand, the MC is really smart, waiting for his another character development in the future! The concept of the story were good, it's about MMORPG and since I'm currently obsessed with MMORPG as well, the early chapter were so relatable, keep the good work!
The writer did a good work on expressing the character feeling, even the start were so heartbreaking! this story has a big potential, would be better if the writer fix the punctuation of the story! overall it was good!
sometime u need to see someone who are in front of u girl! but you were still blinded by love, it's okay, take ur time girl, and notice how there's a better man in front of you!
" I know Jay but it's hard for me not to " I shout then burst out in tears.
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
now look at this man hehehe
All he had to say was "he knew nothing about it and he was sorry I had to find out in a way that I did " he sighs and adds on by saying would stick by my side and even stop being friends with Emir.
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
it's okay girl! there's a lot of man out there, it's just you're still blinded by that scumbag!
I wonder what will happen to me in the future, will I be able to find love and happiness again, will I be able to move on again?
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
forget him! he didn't deserve all of your affection!
It's been 3 months after the incident and I can't believe everything that happened, I mean "am I supposed to "?. Doing things we used to do are now inscribed memories.
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
throw the souvenir away girl! you deserve better than a scumbag like him!
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
did she kicked him? if she hadn't let me do it!
Love gets trampled on and hopelessly melts away, all my relationships ended this way and I thought this one would be it, but this wasn't it until I found out Emir was proposing to someone else, I couldn't surmise it but this was right in front of my eyes, I needed answers to why he would message me and want me to see all that was in front of me. How horrible could this man be, He wasn't the guy I dated 5 years ago could this be his way of getting me out of his way? Looking at the way he puts the ring on her finger tells me he loves her back.
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Urban · Rayne_Rue
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original Angel Has Fallen Down (Haru)
In the vast galaxy known as Leuks and the world within it named Themser, exists a multitude of dimensions. While the galaxy's existence cannot be physically traced, its presence is undeniable. Among its inhabitants is Alice D'Matriese, a sacred angel renowned for her prowess in combat. Her sole purpose is to vanquish the Demon King, Luke Fier'Diese, the brother of Lucifer imprisoned in the forgotten garden of Eden. Her life's mission revolves around awaiting divine orders to eliminate the Demon King. However, fate takes an unexpected turn when she crosses paths with the demon ruler. Despite understanding the magnitude of her transgression, she finds herself unable to resist the stirrings of her heart.12 Chs 0 Collections
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Angel Has Fallen Down
This galaxy is called Leuks and this world is called Themser, there are hundreds of dimensions in this world. This galaxy cannot be found, but its existence is certain. Alice D'Matriese, a holy angel, she is a war angel, her goal in life is to kill the demon king, Luke Fier'Diese, the younger brother of Lucifer who was sealed in the forgotten garden of Eden. Her life goal was to wait for God's messenger to kill the Demon King, but her destiny said differently when she met the demon king, she knew that this was a big sin, but she couldn't do anything about her feelings.8 Chs 5 Collections
Hello everyone! I've been working on this story about 5 years now and been improving it time to time, I've publish this story on another platform but it was in my mother language, it's my first time to write a novel in english, honestly, i'm not really confident with my english, and it basically feels like my first time again on writing a story. I hope everyone can leave a critic, suggestion, & some honest review to improve either my grammar or my way to express the character and story. Thank you!
Angel Has Fallen Down
Fantasy · HaruHaru24