Webnovel Author: Cozma - Novel Collection

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The beginning chapters are quite awesome. I know that only a psychopath would say this but so be it: I like the evil lady. I am sure something happened or someone controls her, the reason for why she is like this makes me attracted to the novel more

I have to say this first. The story is magnificent and I like the way you thought about building the world, the different types of ruling over different countries. I never saw someone use the Zodiac in building their world which is something special. Now the flaws. The writing is unsavory and that is the only thing that pulls down your novel. I hope that you will visit your novel from the beginning chapters and fix it. Otherwise, it would be 5/5 stars.

The way the story is presented is an enjoyable one, you get a clear picture of what is happening which is always a plus. The only real problem I had was that sometimes the punctuation is wrong or exagerated and some forgotten words as I call them.

The story is good, it gives strong, really power emotions from the first chapters. I enjoyed the first chapter(as of now) and the idea of the story and the potential of it is literally immense, but in that aspect it will come down to the author. The MC Lily even though you couldn't say that you feel related to her, not being able to see colors is a hard thing to do, you can feel the fact that she has been through a lot so far. The society around her treated bad, as though she wasn't also a human. I hope to see more chapters.

Shamelessness has no bounds! So I shall rate my own novel. I hope you check out my novel, and if you like it, add it to your libraries as it helps seeing people supporting me. I have nothing to say, you guys can get an own idea of my novel by reading it.

I-I don't know what to say about this. The story is intriguing, the characters feel real, no grammar mistakes from what I know and the sentances are easy to read. The only downside is that it leaves you wanting more..

The story has an interesting beginning that pulled me in. It shows a part of reality and raises attention towards it. I like it and the writing is pretty alright, found just a few grammatical mistakes in rest everything was ok.