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trio not trip. I hate that you cant edit comments.
ch 686 Ruse Ⅸ
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
You never cease to impress me with the direction you have taken the trip of Voldemort, Lestrange, and Dolohov. You have taken what was given and have turned it into a something greater. I adore the silent watcher and planner that Lestrange has become. I I'm constantly surprised by Dolohov's ability to be both a monster and an intelligent character. Most of all I am amazed with Voldemort, how he has discovered the affect the horcruxes have had on his mind had now works to suppress his inner madness. I also love how you show that the madness has not diminished the intelligent mind that brought him to this point.
ch 686 Ruse Ⅸ
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
Dolohov shouldn't be cursed because it was Empusa that killed Mulciber not Dolohov.
ch 683 Ruse Ⅵ
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
Let me just say that Dolohov is one of my favorite characters right now. I love the respect he commands whilst still playing the role of a wild dog. I love the fact that he isn't dumb and is in fact one of the more intelligent characters. And I love how animalistic his entire character is!
ch 683 Ruse Ⅵ
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
I am loving what you decide to do with Voldemort. Having him realize that he has grown mad and that said madness is hindering his ability as leader and take measures to reign in that madness is such a good way to turn him back into a threat. I'm also loving the war on all fronts kind of thing your going for. There's so many different groups each with their own strengths weaknesses and goals.
ch 672 The Master’s Return Ⅶ
A Bend in Time
Book&Literature · EsliEsma
You seem like a bot... Are you a bot? are you real?
This was already mentioned by the mc earlier, he decided to go ahead and try it anyways.
"I screwed up." Ves admitted to himself. He put his complete focus into maintaining his concentration, which made him forget that he could take a peek at his opponent's work. Now he paid for it by allowing Floyd to make a u-turn without alerting him. Turned out that focusing too much on the X-Factor was not always a good thing.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Have you seen him make the same mistake twice? Because I haven't. Every time he's messed up he's taken note of it and listed ways he could have done better. One cannot be infallible, but one can learn.
"I screwed up." Ves admitted to himself. He put his complete focus into maintaining his concentration, which made him forget that he could take a peek at his opponent's work. Now he paid for it by allowing Floyd to make a u-turn without alerting him. Turned out that focusing too much on the X-Factor was not always a good thing.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
This was caused by the mc's concentration stat being quite a bit higher than his other stats. It had nothing to do with intellect
"I screwed up." Ves admitted to himself. He put his complete focus into maintaining his concentration, which made him forget that he could take a peek at his opponent's work. Now he paid for it by allowing Floyd to make a u-turn without alerting him. Turned out that focusing too much on the X-Factor was not always a good thing.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Huh, so Carnegie's legacy lives on.
The mighty Leemar System belonged to the wealthy Carnegie Group. Though they failed to excel in terms of martial might, they built strong relationships with elite mercenary corps who took on much of the burden of defending their territories. Over time, Carnegie Group diverted from the Coalition's trend of looking down from their ivory towers and started to open their borders further to attract talented outsiders.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
It's hardly any of those things, at most I'd call it a bit of a stretch that the NCR had the tech to condition the monster. Even that however could be fairly easy for the author to explain away. The easiest rebuttal to your criticism however is that it has been shown that the entity that sent Afton to this world has a decree of control over what happens and likes to spice things up every now and again.
[Mr X]
Steel Waste
Video Games · Niggross