Webnovel Author: Darkfighter - Novel Collection

more more so enjiyable to read

really loved this read would love for there to be more

thats only a compliment to another words if someone used my words in there story or even a portion of the story it's self it would only be a compliment

Its very simple and in my opinion there's the odd error with words but other than that you have told a wonderful story so far. KISS Keep It Simple Stupid Sometimes the best reading is nice easy reading never think that you have the inability to write because you definitely do believe in your self. You have a lovely ability to keep it mysterious keep that it gives the reader more to think about. The way you delve into emotion is lovely you need to brush up on ways of explaining this don't be afraid to be repetive sometimes using the most common word is what makes it easy to read for us readers no thinking about whats going on only letting the story unfold in are minds with no confusion. How he made up his own path and stepped away from the systematic norm and broke free of his chains is need a lot more let him break all the rules let him dominate the world how he wants the way he wants it can be flashy it can be mesmerising it can be in the open bold and proud but it can also be the absolute opposite to dominate is to dominate in every aspect remember that there is no right or wrong way to do so.