Webnovel Author: Galatea1o1 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

As to continue from my comment from above. The character is bland, very bland. As I said, the MC is generic, if not straight-up bad; the story is, to put it simply, very dull due to how the character interacts or says. Not to mention the other two characters that are blander than the cardboard box itself. An excellent example of character writing, when it comes to character introduction, would be the introduction of Arbiter in Halo 2; it takes less than 5 minutes to open. Still, I learned so much about the character and the world itself. Another good example would be the introduction of Natasha, aka Black Widow, in the first Avenger movie. You can go and watch it and see what I mean. There is no charm in this story that makes me want to read more, except for maybe the plot, but that doesn't mean anything when the character is boring, and it makes me not want to read more of it. I want good character writing that would like me to read more, which is very lacking in the story. So, I hope you can improve on that.

While I love to leave a review, I don't think I can do it due to how early in the story we are, but I can still give you some criticism. The plot is fascinating; I had not seen a story like this, but at the same time, it can get really boring due to how repetitive it can be, as the chapters so far is nothing more than the MC creating thing while it was interesting at first it can get really dull quite if all he did is make things. This might not seem fair considering this very early in the story, but with story ideas like that, I can see massive potential in the plot itself, so I understand why the MC need to learn how to create life and the world itself. But my most significant criticism of this story so far is the character writing or the lack thereof. Character writing is king when it comes to a story. You could have a bad plot but a good character, and I would still consider the story good. The character here, however, is very bland, with no personality except for surface-level stuff. That is me being generous, but that is still not good enough because that still doesn't stop them from being anything more than cardboard. You could say it is still early in the story, and you have no time to establish character, but I would say you might be wrong. A 1000 words chapter can quickly establish your characters; anything that character does or does not do, said or not said, can contribute to creating a character. The MC is so generic that it is insulting; there is nothing I can tell about the MC due to how empty he is. The questions he asks and the thing that he doesn't give me any hint about the MC's personality, except for maybe that soul-devouring question, but that is not good enough. I understand that the MC is like a reader stand-in so that we would understand and would ask the fundamental question that we have; however, a reader stand-in is not good enough, he should be asking all sorts of questions when he was chosen as Keeper, but he does not. He should not have this blank personality considering he is a soul that lived before, so he shouts have some character or trait, but he does not. Good character writing should move the plot along while informing us what kind of characters there are or giving us a hint about the said character's personality or trait. There is more I wanted to say, but I will continue this with a reply to this comment so you can read on that.

Well, it's going to be a massive arc for a reason.

Not just any Annihilus, this is Annihilus with half of the Phoenix Force

He will create an organisation alright, but it will not be port mafia. I was thinking about something more... holy, like an angel... but focusing more on death... like decay... hmmm.🤔🤔🤔