I bet the novel.
What's the surprise and the 2nd item of shop?
Fantasy · DevilDarkness
curly *horns
In the mushroom forest, while the sun was setting. A creature grazed on the small mushroom on the ground. The creature had long and curly hons, as well as a thin coat of fur. Overall, the creature looked a lot like a small mountain goat.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
*first
The one who dared firt fly."
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
*before a second could pass
Everything instantly turned to dust. And in a mere second, and beforw a swcond cpuld paas, it was all sucked into the child's body.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
and *defined the
"Reality is like a canvas that has existed since the beginning of time. When the first beings existed, they were like painters who put a stroke on the canvas. Each being that existed left a stroke of their own and defied the world as they saw it.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
so the *three
So the tree took the food that the young man was supposed to eat and left the room. Watching them leave, the young man sighed lightly.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
hundreds of *pieces
The arch of rock suddenly and rapidly cracked before it turned to hundreds of prices. hearing the sudden sound, the wolf alpha was confused and tried to look around. But it was too late to react.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
hope to wish the author a good day. Never forget a good story :)
ch 53 Horde and Primal Behavior
Fantasy · AlexzY
err, the last sentence needs a rewrite
Like that, the day went on with the goblins working hard to build the walls. At first the goblins were a bit confused as to what they were doing and why. But as the wall grew taller with each brick layed, the goblins got a good idea of what was happening. Well, some of them did, as some of the goblins an no goblins were till in the dark of what was the use of this... tall thing.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
small *creature
"There was nine of you and only six of them. How could you have failed like this? To such a small xreature even." The kobold standing in front the nine asked. As it said this, it took a glance at the green skinned goblin that laid unconsciously on the ground not far away.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
only, *at that
Without hesitation, the kobolds went closer to the head and angrily looked at it. Seeing the head, the kobolds felt their blood boil in anger. They had seen this very head still just a few hours ago after all. Only, t that time it was still alive and well. So Such a sight did all but please the three.
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
its *body
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
*the hobgoblin
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
hob-goblin, not kobold
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
the *three kobolds.
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
because *of the
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
I use the audio feature to listen at work, but if I get the chance, I'll try to comment on the corrections.
ch 18 Chapter 18: More smarter
Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
*perfectly
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
*even
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Fantasy · 4thBlackGoblin
is his memory of the novel perfect?
What's the surprise and the 2nd item of shop?
Life Of A Nobody - as a Villain
Fantasy · DevilDarkness