interesting, hope it won't end that quickly
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Fantasy · Paul_Tromba
build a giant wall* hero doesn't have system to just buy it outright and pop it to existence
As for monsters? I will just buy a giant wall to prevent them from entering. And to be sure, I will also buy a few sunflowers to plant on the surroundings so that monsters don't approach my home.
Video Games · Jarron7
*spoiler Samuel is evil eisen can use minor magic irl im on 612 chapter.
ch 216 Conversing and interruptions
Games · Breuno
hey author, I suggest you read "spending my retirement in a game" similar setting to your own novel except that one is mainly about crafting but not only. It would be great if eldarian could do the same as Eisen irl
ch 216 Conversing and interruptions
Games · Breuno
Could you also read my novel? Tt's still very short (under 8k words)
Magnito? Dude it's Magneto
"I know you can seal our abilities very easily and I was even worried to even visit your house but we got permission from your parents who said they will not ask for you to help us but they will also be happy if you can help us. " said Eric / Magnito with a serious face as he stood beside Charles.
Anime & Comics · Shaikh_Tohaa
https://***.youtube.com/watch?v=p_8yK2kmxoo&ab_channel=Kurzgesagt%E2%80%93InaNutshell
ch 11 Another Irregular
Video Games · Explorer_Avalon
could you show where i made mistakes? i'm currently working on this novel alone so it's a little hard to see all of the mistakes
ch 0 2 Shit i'm immortal?
Video Games · Explorer_Avalon
maybe? who knows?
ch 10 Caves of Misery
Video Games · Explorer_Avalon
if ya think this time skip is bad please read "Tree of Aeons" first
ch 10 Caves of Misery
Video Games · Explorer_Avalon
12:17 in the video
ch 0 9 The great adventure begins!
Video Games · Explorer_Avalon
writting quality? while there are mistakes they are negligeable. Stability of updates? author loves editing every chapter which resets reading progress in library and makes it hard to acccess the fic because of said editing. clearly author has no concept of a google documents. Story development? for the first 40 chaps it was average after it just straight descend. the story with potential turned bland and uniteresting. you could skip 200 words or couple of chaps and still would have clear idea what's happening. Character design? At first realistic later pessimistic cretin. World background? a lot of stealing from other works so propably author didn't find the need for better story background.
An ton's Journey ( StarCraft + other worlds)
Video Games · Muravey