I want to create a novel.... one that can touch the hearts of many like the manga and anime I used to read. It sound's cliché, but that's my dream
2020-06-02 Joined United Nations
Enjoyable read. Writing style was clear and easy to follow, while it’a early to comment on how the story will go I have high hopes for this story!
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ch 0 6 This world...
Fantasy · Shuyuka
You'll have to continue reading on VoyceMe, sorry for not being thorough with explaining >.< But you'll be able to see a lot more things like my Chapter headers and formatting things, so I hope you'll continue following it!
ch 0 9 Black Sheep
Fantasy · Shuyuka
It was a pretty interesting read. Writing style was clean and easy to follow and the plot definitely is going in an interesting direction. This story would be perfect for a Visual Novel or something like that. Updates are consistent so you'll always have chapters to read whenever. One critique I think I may have is that there are a lot of opportunities to capitalize on ways to endear the audience to characters that are a bit passed up on (Usage of dialogue, possible character quirks, etc) and there tends to be a lot of information dumps instead of letting certain things be discovered through the story. Definitely not a dealbreaker, I hope to see what this author makes in the future!