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I agree it's mundane and hard for me to picture a story cause I don't remember what every character looks like or the scenery os just described as white forest or green plains or simply just town

I love reading this book. at first I was hesitant cause of how the powers of the MC worked but as the story progressed I think it was well executed and growing upon. my only gripe is lack of description of scenery and characters. I constantly forget what they look like as they are only ever described by a hair color or beautiful and handsome and lack of description between seeing the world and the characters makes it hard for my mind to tell me a scenic story

I'm not sure how this book is not in the top 20 rankings. while its is a bit slow at times the pacing comes with purpose seems not to be there to just drag the story out but to simply not overwhelm the reader with a info dump. the world design can be a bit confusing at first but it is slowly and nicely coming together at this point. the other also does a good job of constantly reminding you what characters look like so you're not forgetting. I also appreciate that the main character is not a wimp and is logical in approach. overall this story and world have really great potential and I highly reccomend it.

it's a good story so far at least I think so but dont waste your time or money cause the author is flimsy at best and hasn't actually finished any story they have written it's been about 3 weeks at this review since the last update.

I don't really leave reviews so let's start there. first the sentence structure seems really basic which is fine as it keeps it simple and easy to grasp at times. though I think some of it is to really reach wors count which is understandable. -takes time to really introduce the world which can be boring at times but provides a solid background to the characters and world immersion that many stories dont on here. -can tell thought went into each of the characters as none of them really seem wasted -progression is at a solid pace now for story can tell that there is thought in it and not just mindless writing. also clearly at least listens and considers comment readers have left behind. its refreshing to find an author that cares about their work and readers interest. 60 chapters in and I greatly look forward to the develop and story this world has to offer.