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Yeah, I write wrong. Thankk you for reminding me.
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
Hmm, i think i described it wrong. Thankk you i will change it bro.
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
it is a recovery speed
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
Yeah, it should be but because the referee didn't see when Eevee pass out so she simply make it draw.
He sees on the other side Eevee is also passed out, so he changes his words, "Ehem, Because both Pokemon from both sides are unable to fight. This battle ended in a draw!"
Pokemon My Story
Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
Nope
Even though he didn't mind it, and thought this is a good thing to deepen their bond. So he is also happy about it.
Pokemon My Story
Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
I see so that's what you mean. Okay, after Jovan and Denis finish fighting. I will try thinking about a new plot so it will not be like this anymore. Maybe, secret realm, college fight test, etc.
ch 27 Chapter 27: Challenge
Pokemon My Story
Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
Next chapter is a battle
ch 27 Chapter 27: Challenge
Pokemon My Story
Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
I thought if it is too rush then it will be no good.
ch 27 Chapter 27: Challenge
Pokemon My Story
Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
Thankk you for correcting me
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Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
I am sorry. I write it wrong.
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Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
It should be diamond
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Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
Nah, I never delete the comment
ch 14 Chapter 14: Song Xue's Master
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
Yeah, I think so. Don't worry in the next chapter I will make the story progress again. Actually, I put it like that to delay so I can think of another plot idea to put in this story.
ch 25 Chapter 25 Powerful Scyther!
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Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
Hahaha, sorry brother it got swap from another novel.
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Anime & Comics · Vaness_Dar
Still searching for it 👍
ch 15 Chapter 15: Test
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Fantasy · Vaness_Dar
Father Gabriel?
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TEEN WOLF: BLOODBORN
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