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uni started, I dunno when I will be able to give another chap. SO yea, on haitus for now
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Day Twelve
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fixed. Thanks!
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fixed. Thanks!
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umm... which? I haven't read any bloody mist fanfic.
Hearing her daughter's doubt, the matriarch's face immediately contorted in anger, "Do you think of my son as any less than a no-name orphan? If she can go through a single tailed beast transfer then my Utakata can go through tens of these. Just wait for him to grow up a bit."
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Masaru is the character I created... Utakata killed Harusame, the seal master who is doing the seal transfer in the series. I think there were only two Hoshigakis shown in the series, Kisame and one from boruto.
Upon saying the last sentence she glared at Masaru, the prodigy of the Hoshigaki clan who immediately glared back at her. Prompting his father, the patriarch of the Hoshigakis; Katsuo Hoshigaki to defend his son.
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The above question was translated as "I liked the novel. Author, is it possible to make the chapters longer?" by google translate.
ch 0 9 NOT A CHAPTER
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Well, I'm aiming for chapters of around 2k words, for now, this should be longer than chapters of most web novels out there (1-1.5k words). But I aim to make it around 2.5k words as my writing speed increases a bit. It still takes me around 6-8 hours (as I have to write+edit+proofread myself) to pump out a chapter right now. So yeah you may have to wait a bit more for that.
ch 0 9 NOT A CHAPTER
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Well, I think that much is not enough. Otherwise in Sasuke vs Chino in Sasuke Hiden, Sasuke would have been killed. He fell into her genjutsu two times in a row. So my theory is you need to get a substantial amount of your chakra into someone's system to control them, and as your eyes get stronger the requirement lessens.
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Well, it's just that Academy Arc tends to go boring pretty fast, so I am planning to do some world-building along the way right now. It will be a bit more MC-centric (after all he is the main character) after he gets out of schooling.
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his crush
Dunn half-turned his body and turned his head back, with his abstruse gray eyes he said, "A true Spirit Medium."
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I didn't know about that. Well I will be editing the beginning chapters once again on later date, I will be sure to modify this when the time comes. Thanks!!
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I want MC's power to mostly revolve around blood manipulation and blood arts. So, I don't know how feasible your suggestions would be as my plans for the story are not that concrete yet. I will try doing that if it fits nicely later in the story. Thanks for the suggestion tho.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6: The Seal Transfer (2)
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ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Seal Transfer
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Third read. Lets goo!!!
Upon saying this, he paused for a moment. He said amiably and calmly, "The Fool."
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Well, I'm thinking of making his primary affinity be water release and your idea seems to revolve around wind release. And I don't think that the ninja world is behind ours in terms of theoretical sciences or mathematics. Without the basics of science and math, they probably wouldn't be able to create chakra techniques. It's just the difference in application. Almost all of their research was used for weaponization while we used our research for both weaponization and increasing the quality of life. So having the knowledge of science from Earth wouldn't really give MC much of an edge in the ninja world imo.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Seal Transfer
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The contrast between the current him and the person he becomes by the end of the book is complete black and white. And it happened at such a natural pace as well. Great character dev.
Wh— Zhou Mingrui felt inexplicably horrified as he stood up abruptly. However, before his feet fully straightened, his brain protested with throbbing pain. It made him temporarily lose his strength as he fell uncontrollably. His buttocks slammed heavily onto the burly wood chair.
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ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Seal Transfer
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haven't thought that far yet... and yea it's on haitus rn, uni started so...
Naruto: The Bloody Mist
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