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M0ns00n
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YES! the chakra system of naruto is just magic, work with it however u like
[A/N: Warning, Heavy AU elements incoming, the description of Chakra usage and learning is so barebones in the manga that I've taken it on myself to construct my own system based of fanon, canon and my own ideas. The system will be consistent but since this is my story and Chakra will heavily influence the future plot, I made it specifically to suit the Fic and some ideas I have for the future, hope you find potential in it as I do]
Naruto: Subject #37
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
I never even comment but ppl like u r so annoying
ch 0 3 Who am I?
Naruto: Subject #37
Anime & Comics · _Wint3r_
Ooo those are some interesting ideas you brought up. As a hint, I'll remind you of chapter two when he was notified "[Similar precedent(s) found… applying patch…]" when the other two systems were incompatible with his soul, this should narrow down the possibilities. Cal being a bit of an idiot is a plot point but he will for sure start to uncover more secrets about the system, as of chapter 12 it has only been about 3 days since he had been put into his new body, soon he will understand it's features in much greater detail. Thanks for your comment, I'll definitely take that last point of Cal's curiousity towards the system into consideration for future chapters :)
ch 12 Encounter (pt 1)
Skeleton's Struggle
Fantasy · M0ns00n
I'm reworking all the chapters from 1 until the chapter where I will start to change things, I have started the rework. The quality of my writing has improved from when I started chicken's rise and I'll have to update all of it to a standard that I think is good. Again, thank you so much for your interest Larry, you're comment has given me more motivation to keep going and work on Chicken's Rise alongside Skeletons Struggle.
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Skeleton's Struggle
Fantasy · M0ns00n
Oh my god Larry I'm sorry it slipped my mind, I ran into issues with Chickens rise and am planning on deleting some chapters so I can re-do the last 10 or so chapters. Skeleton's struggle in my opinion has a lot more potential at this point in time but I will def go back to chickens rise soon, I can't promise a day but I can't create more chapters until I re-work the story.
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Skeleton's Struggle
Fantasy · M0ns00n
Thanks calcium comrade, hope you enjoy the read!
prolly uses more energy and takes more time
"AH! Forget it, I'll just do it. If I die, I die." Lin Wu spoke in a helpless tone.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
n u g g i e s o f c h i k k k k k k k k i i i i i e e e e
"Chickie nuggies! It's right where the explosion happened. Wait, it's not the reason for the explosion, is it?" Lin Wu exclaimed.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
Feels delicious according to the arm long worm!
"That… was rather… Delicious!" Lin Wu exclaimed as he felt the energy stir within his body.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
"I know this isnt how it works" I already said it in the first comment, I just said the thought because when I imagined it, it was very disturbing
"Huh, I got hungry pretty fast. Perhaps worms are just always hungry like this." Lin Wu thought to himself.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
So if he wanted to, could he go in a circle? constantly pooping and eating. I know this isnt how it works but i got the idea in my head and you need to suffer with me
"Huh, I got hungry pretty fast. Perhaps worms are just always hungry like this." Lin Wu thought to himself.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
Hey man I know it's 2cm but it the motion in the ocean that counts, chin up king :,)
He looked around for the source of sound but could not really spot it due to its stature. Lin Wu was very small, his length was about two centimeters and his thickness was of about two millimeters as well. In every aspect, he could only be described as tiny. His color was dark brown and his skin was smooth, yet was not slimy like an earthworm.
Rise Of The Worm Sovereign
Eastern · Grand_Void_Daoist
You must be from another universe then
Well you see, that's a universal truth.
Chicken's Rise
Fantasy · M0ns00n
Super high potential, the author knows how to write and the plot is progressing well, other than story development which I gavw 4 stars, the rest is 5 for sure. 4 is just because I'm unsure about the MC's personality as of now, i'll update it if it changes
DC: System Shock (COMPLETED)
Anime & Comics · Wicked132