We need to get the gender words correct. Please use 'he' and 'him' or 'she' and 'her' for male and female respectively. Otherwise it may confuse readers. The story is great so far, keep it up!
Lina was the maid who served Shizune until she was five years old. While Lina was taking my body measurements, I learned a lot about Shizune's likes and dislikes. Judging by her appearance, she was probably around 8-10 years old. I secretly prayed for him to have to serve a slut like Shizune at such a young age
Fantasy · OLD_storage
Learning was achieved on this day 🤣
"We will do it ourselves this time." Sylvia cut Mika off.
Fantasy · VERSON
this is confusing to read ngl. The flow is going everywhere and it seems things jump around. If I were you, I would build up a plot point (event / arc 1), expand on it, then add in future plot points as foreshadowing (events 2,34...) while still focusing on the initial plot (event /arc 1) point you're expanding on.
ch 38 The Turning Point [3]{Edited}
Fantasy · Secretly_A_Villian
I first read this as "in a sugary lab". I'm like, is this candy land? I'm tired.
In a Surgery Lab...
Action · Supreme_IQ
check my comment
ch 429 147. Nesting Dolls Together
Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
I transcended.
"Because then it'd be a foot."
Urban · BurnerAccount
he's 12.
'Interesting kid.' Her eyes lingered on Azzy for a couple of seconds before she deactivated the effect.
Fantasy · Snowstar
or an incredibly short elliptical orbit
The sun would have to be orbiting the planet!
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
I didnt realize that the author's comment could have that much text. Didn't even know you could tap to expand it till now. Thanks and keep up the great work!
//Author's warning regarding the doubts/worries I'm starting to see in the comments: Go and check out the author's notes cuz I don't want to spam it here. It's a message on the longer side but should dispel most of your worries//
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
Maidenless
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Fantasy · SocialHippo
Ah yes, about 200 of these potatoes worth of iron. Anything but the metric system.
"Oh, that's close to half a Kilogram, so you need about a hundred Kilograms?"
Eastern · Biako
Toga?
The clothes I wore, no, robe. Was a pale blue... dress? I have no idea what they call these, it looked like a bathrobe only it was made of silk.
Eastern · Biako
Finally, a Chad MC who sticks to his guns. I approve.
This one officer!
Half an hour later however, Xiao Lin reached the entrance of the hotel where the merchant group was staying. Upon turning around, he smiled bitterly when he saw that the little girl had been following him, though she did so while deliberately keeping a certain distance.
Sci-fi · The Final Fool
literally two minds fighting for third place.
The snobby blonde went back to her friend group with a much better-behaved Goblin while Wolfe tried not to laugh. They were both idiots, and he wondered which one would win the battle of wits.
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
username checks out.
#Wetgirl: So handsome… I am already wet…
Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 54 being noble
After reborn, I became the Butler of the Count’s tsundere daughter
Fantasy · OLD_storage