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RuthFish
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this is confusing to read ngl. The flow is going everywhere and it seems things jump around. If I were you, I would build up a plot point (event / arc 1), expand on it, then add in future plot points as foreshadowing (events 2,34...) while still focusing on the initial plot (event /arc 1) point you're expanding on.
ch 38 The Turning Point [3]{Edited}
Villainous Me: Help! The heroines are yanderes!
Fantasy · Secretly_A_Villian
I first read this as "in a sugary lab". I'm like, is this candy land? I'm tired.
In a Surgery Lab...
Chaos Devourer System
Action · Supreme_IQ
check my comment
ch 429 147. Nesting Dolls Together
Constructing-Style Wizard
Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
I transcended.
"Because then it'd be a foot."
Elite Dungeon Manager
Urban · BurnerAccount
he's 12.
'Interesting kid.' Her eyes lingered on Azzy for a couple of seconds before she deactivated the effect.
My Soul card is a Reaper
Fantasy · Snowstar
or an incredibly short elliptical orbit
The sun would have to be orbiting the planet!
Chaos Prophet
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
I didnt realize that the author's comment could have that much text. Didn't even know you could tap to expand it till now. Thanks and keep up the great work!
//Author's warning regarding the doubts/worries I'm starting to see in the comments: Go and check out the author's notes cuz I don't want to spam it here. It's a message on the longer side but should dispel most of your worries//
Riches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!
Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
Maidenless
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My Wives Are Too Overpowered
Fantasy · SocialHippo
Ah yes, about 200 of these potatoes worth of iron. Anything but the metric system.
"Oh, that's close to half a Kilogram, so you need about a hundred Kilograms?"
Poison God's Heritage
Eastern · Biako
Toga?
The clothes I wore, no, robe. Was a pale blue... dress? I have no idea what they call these, it looked like a bathrobe only it was made of silk.
Poison God's Heritage
Eastern · Biako
Finally, a Chad MC who sticks to his guns. I approve.
This one officer!
Half an hour later however, Xiao Lin reached the entrance of the hotel where the merchant group was staying. Upon turning around, he smiled bitterly when he saw that the little girl had been following him, though she did so while deliberately keeping a certain distance.
Elite Mages' Academy
Sci-fi · The Final Fool
literally two minds fighting for third place.
The snobby blonde went back to her friend group with a much better-behaved Goblin while Wolfe tried not to laugh. They were both idiots, and he wondered which one would win the battle of wits.
Inheritor Of Magic: The Magi King
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
username checks out.
#Wetgirl: So handsome… I am already wet…
Villain Is on Vacation
Fantasy · Madwriter_2377
9-1-1, I'd like to report a murder.
"Isn't five minutes a bit too much? I know a third-year student who can only last three minutes…"
Arcane Academy: The Divine Extraction Legacy
Fantasy · xlntz
desist
As for the princess, she was a short girl with straight, chestnut-coloured, medium-length hair. She had a baby face and looked like the kind whose facial expressions change constantly.
Reincarnated Hero System
Fantasy · _michael
second word is apostles I think.
Race - ###e# ###s###e#
Reincarnated Hero System
Fantasy · _michael
Learning was achieved on this day 🤣
"We will do it ourselves this time." Sylvia cut Mika off.
The Angelic System That Turned My Life Into Hell
Fantasy · VERSON