Webnovel Author: Grace_Gaye - Novel Collection

What do you think about my book? Is there something I need to add or subtract? I will appreciate it if I can get a comment on what I'm doing

I give myself a five-star for motivation. I tried writing a novel before, but then, I got lost. so I left it. After reading some stories, I decided to try again, and I'm hoping that people would have an interest in this one.