Webnovel Author: Winterwisps - Novel Collection

You're very welcome :). All the technical stuff I've pointed out is more or less about practice, so just keep working on it. Also, keep in mind to not just accept my commentary, but look it up the issue yourself if you have any doubts. A good way to learn is simply to do stuff, but the best way is to do it and then reflect afterward, at least that's my experience. Good luck out there!

Short review: an action-packed start, with an MC who's very convinced he's being tormented in a subtle way, and some good characterizations. Long review: The writing is good, with only a few kinks, overall making it a natural read. The story starts out strong, with action and characterizations, but then it drags a little bit while the whole setting is being explained. Perhaps I'm being harsh, but if action is being thrown at me from the start, I kinda expect there to be more stabby stabby than talky talky in the story. The characters are all well-rounded, with a good schism between the MC's expectations, based on his old world, and what is actually happening in this new world. It's very well done. Which brings me to the world, which seems deep and well-thought out. I have some questions which I would like to get answered in the future, but for now I give it all the marks I can.

Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system. Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.