Webnovel Author: GenericMustache - Fanfic Collection

I did, I liked the first one and think this one will be even better.

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I can definitely see the issue now that you provided more insight. I was aiming for the MC to get involved in certain events and I definitely rushed the plot and forced character change. Thank you for your insight on the issues with this fanfic.

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Seeing as there are many complaints about the development of the story in this chapter, I would appreciate some helpful insight on the issue. Is the MC contradicting his original goal too much? Is Ultron too involved with him that it seems like he is in control? Is the MC turning too much into a basic villain rather than someone like Madara or Pain? I am basically trying to go off of these characters but I clearly missed the mark judging by the comments.

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Ultron is basically an AI, but if August dies then so does he. I am still writing future chapters, so I can't guarantee him getting an independent body.

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Thank you, and please let me know what you found that disinterested you? This is probably my worst chapter so far but it would help for any corrections and writing in the future.

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He can switch similar to how Ultron did it with his drones.

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*I have several events for the future that I believe are pretty unique to the Marvel fanfic scene on this website.*

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I appreciate the suggestions and I honestly do the same thing with other characters. The distancing will definitely come later, but it's not like he won't have any human interaction in the future (will just be limited). I have several events that I believe are pretty unique to the Marvel fanfic scene on this website. This fic will obviously not be perfect like any other, but comments allow me to notice these errors and it really helps to take a step back to really analyze what I have written.

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I definitely appreciate the feedback and concern for the future of this fic. I wrote this late last night because I honestly forgot, but that doesn't excuse killing kids. This also brings an ethical issue to the equation, but I wanted to show the misanthropy within the MC. He should be experiencing a loss of humanity over time, but this was a bit too much and I can understand.

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I can redo the last part and change who he targets, but I feel like he would want the most accurate data. Thought targeting people close to his age and stature fit the bill. I can understand the issue because I am literally saying they are 'kids' when I wrote them in.

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Thanks for the feedback! I meant for the 'R-18' label to be for the gory scenes later in the novel (apologies for the confusion) and might change it if there are still people wondering why it is there. I can definitely say it won't be a story about 'just killing humans' because that is boring and I realized that the fanfic would become dull and uninteresting really quick. Needless to say, I will take these ideas into consideration for future chapters.

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