I had aux chapters planned for this weekend since I am on my break and can get to them, but can you explain what else needs explaining? It'll help a lot while I'm working on them either later today or early tomorrow. Thanks.
ch 0 2 Age of Recruitment
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Fixed it, sorry.
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Except Danitour won't end up like Laskhmi-2.
Danitour nodded and looked up. He saw all the silent Ferals looking down at them, their eyes seemed vicious and hungry... to him.
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A Legion that tried to claim Krugi by force.
But Danitour stayed there because of his memories. He had a dark past, a little secret only a few know about. Those who defended against the Breckus Legion knew about it.
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Considering Ether is drastically shorter than the average Zegus and has a different kind of hairstyle than Zegus, it's easy to detect Ether from a group of Zegus. But to answer the main question: Ferals hunt Threshers whenever food is running very low, to do this they simply look for unstable soil mounds. That usually means there's a Thresher family inside.
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Instead, she climbs a tree!
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Most of their time together was focused on other things. Can't blame him.
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It's a mistake by my end, obviously. I forgot to put 'in unison' somewhere.
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Yes he was. Like I mentioned earlier in the chapter, they used to kill Strem for practice back inside the Light Legion. It's like killing a bug and killing another person. You wouldn't care if you killed a bug, but you would obviously care if you killed another person.
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The one and only.
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Digon by itself is just a mountain. Thawed believe otherwise because of the guardians.
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I was originally thinking of adding a Variant like this but couldn't think of ways to make them unique from all the others. The idea is interesting and I'll probably add it in as a mutation for a Variant but will need to think about those more.
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Sky Beasts are the actual species. I'll be diving deeper into them with the aux chapters I'm planning on releasing later today (thank you for motivating me to make them, by the way. Anymore feedback is welcomed). Hope that clears the question up.
ch 10 First Flight
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