Webnovel Author: RetricBlast - Novel Collection

I've read the original version of this novel, and let me tell you all right now: you'll fall in love. It's difficult enough to keep me hooked into a novel, but somehow this one made me want to come back and read more. The characters bounce off one another pretty well, and the conversations feel real. And some characters here are very unlike the ones I've read. Most of the time it's this guy or girl who is in perfect condition, but in this novel there are some characters who have disabilities and have to make it up in other ways. It's some fresh air from ocean of perfectly fit and capable characters out there. The story is also good, I like the direction it's going so far and would really love to stick to it until the very end. Too long, didn't read: give it a try, some unique characters that aren't the basic perfectly fit character, good story, and amazing writing.

Thank you. This question is a difficult one, honestly. My best answer is picking other things apart and going crazy with the results.

The story so far is very good. The characters are also well written so far. And the tag of an interesting story is well deserved, would recommend.

The writing quality could use some work but it's still readable. Published chapters are coming out at a good pace and it transitions from chapter to chapter very well. Good job!

Who knew just 2 chapters was enough to hook someone in? The author did an amazing job at setting up the main character for a real good twist later on. I can tell the story is going in the right direction. Good work, would recommend!

I have to say, I really liked the origins behind the setting of the starting chapters. The characters themselves flowed very well with one another. The author also did a really good job at painting a picture using words for the readers. I'd highly recommend.