heimdallsgothi

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heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
1 years ago
Posted

This was a really fun and interesting read and I would love for the story to continue. I am glad its not simply a version of You tied your shoe, you now get a Bugatti style story

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
1 years ago
Commented

Titles, not tittles

Instead of discussing with Evangeline Daimon opened the tittles tab, with all that has happened he has actually not explored all the tabs from the system and the tittles were not his top priority back then, so far, he had only one tittle unlocked.

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Reincarnated With The Van Helsing System

Fantasy · Barion_Trident

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
1 years ago
Posted

average when compared to similar novels using this trope. Typical errors are using the wrong genders when referring to known characters, even switching in the same sentance

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
3 years ago
Posted

this one is surprisingly good, I actually read through the first 61 fell swoop. it was fun and entertaining and the main character while strong is not stupidly overpowered compared to everything else

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
3 years ago
Commented

This should read as "I'll do as you said."

Duan Ling Tian smiled and nodded. "You have ambition! I'll so as you said."

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
3 years ago
Commented

thatm should be that

Li Qing looked at Meng Quan as he said, in a cold voice, “Meng Quan, don’t be complacent. I was only careless earlier. If not for thatm you might not have been able to defeat me.”

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens

Eastern · Feng Qin Yang

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
4 years ago
Commented

Newborn.. six.. then twelve At least its a different start. Its caught my attention at least

It was Ren's twelfth birthday and today was the day Ren's father Matias was going to teach him how to hunt. Matias had gifted his son a bow and some arrows, as well as a hunting knife. Valdel was also with them since he begged Matias to take him as well.

Demon Lord's Reincarnation

Demon Lord's Reincarnation

Fantasy · lynerparel

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
4 years ago
Commented

At least there wasn't the chapter on learning how to walk at less than a year..etc. Super disciplined babies are kinda strange

It has been six years since Ren formerly known as Kretos reincarnated and turned into a human. As he grew up, he now understood a lot of things, about his family, this village, and the world around him.

Demon Lord's Reincarnation

Demon Lord's Reincarnation

Fantasy · lynerparel

heimdallsgothi
heimdallsgothi
4 years ago
Commented

Looks like this is a dead/dropped novel