Webnovel Author: Piiiiza - Fanfic Collection

I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.

A Game To Remember

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Piiiiza

2yr

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A Game To Remember

Anime & Comics · Piiiiza

Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to OverdoseOnSleep

The day I try write xianxia characters, is the day I get a girlfriend... never.

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A Game To Remember

Anime & Comics · Piiiiza

Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to squidtaken

That's what the rip meant

ch 10 A Hell Of A Dungeon (Long Chapter)

A Game To Remember

Anime & Comics · Piiiiza

Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to D_REAPER

(Clarent Stray)

A Game To Remember

Anime & Comics · Piiiiza

Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to Jekyll_et_Hyde

1st answer. I had no idea how I would integrate him into the festival. Unless I wanted him to prevent Yang getting banned from the tournament, or him helping Ruby, I just wouldn't know what else to do.

ch 12 A Tint Of Insanity

A Game To Remember

Anime & Comics · Piiiiza

Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to Smebius

*sucks in breath*

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A Game To Remember

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Piiiiza

2yr

Replied to Smebius

Genius.

"I'm here to kill you, yada yada, your bad, I'm badder, Ratio." My 21st century words seemed to throw her off as she raised an eyebrow, prompting me to roll my eyes.