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I love it. It’s honestly just an easy going experience while reading it and there’s no need for any extreme actions like in other fanfics. Plz keep uploading 😊

That was of the best, if not the best novel I have read in my life. I quite literally fell in love with it. The fusion was perfectly done, which is amazing as there are so many ways to screw this up. This is one of two novels which made me feel good about a novel. The others were mainly there to pass the time or look for inspiration. But this had me enjoying it every step of the way. I can honestly say that this is the best novel I’ve read in my life. Heck, if you wrote this as a short story you could actually sell it quite well. You perfectly showed the emotions of the characters in a realistic situation, instead of the actual HP series that had honestly been reduced to a super hero novel suitable for babies. Thank you so much for writing this fanfic. It was an honour to read this and anybody against this can “bugger off”. 😈😈😈

The story is really good!!! You should split him up from Luffy cuz he gets screwed in the canon. Let him have his own crew and ship, and get him to steal the members of Luffy’s crew (all the girls!!!) and the ones who can help him to be the sniper king. So Franky, Zoro, Robin are a must cuz it kinda balances the group. Nami’s good too. For the rest just choose whoever you want cuz you already get the main players filled out from the above mentioned. For the cook anyone who’s not Sanji cuz he’s probably the weakest right after Ussop. Plus I don’t think you’ll be able to copy his attitude as a lovesick retard. No offence. Otherwise this is an amazing novel and you should definitely continue it :)

If you want a few tips on how to continue the story just read on. Otherwise this was an amazing fanfic and I would honestly love to see if you could keep this up. Here’s the ideas: How about you try writing up to the battle after Im and being recognised as the ruler of the world. Also you could have his son being kidnapped to kickstart the battle. After that how about a short arc with him exploring all of the seas, finding all the mythical place like the all blue (honestly for this I’m assuming it’s directly below the reverse mountain cuz that’s the most logical way), Elbaf, and the other places. You could also add him fusing the world devil fruit with a clone and get him to reunite the super continent Pangea to be the true ruler. And you can add more kids during this. Plus add in a bit more to the family part of the commanders who are single, and whitebeard. You could add in the annihilation or the celestial dragons. After this you could either finish it or continue on. If you are continuing, then you could have him marking the one piece world with the Mark devil fruit or maybe a space devil fruit, and have him travel to other anime worlds. You could have him meeting god again and being given the choice to either restart the story or continue onwards to another world. Also give him the ability to take his family and friends with him, or you can do the simple thing and just bind the world to his soul, allowing him to be the true ruler of the world and then he would be able to take care of his family. Or you could give him something like a personal world where only the people he allows can enter. And you could set a reasonable time dilation cuz you don’t want him to miss out on his family time too much while he’s in a different world. There should also be a limitation on the world where for the moment only Seth can enter, and the rest have to stay behind. Plus you could add a few more girls if you want by feeding him an energy or stamina related devil fruit. It’s not like the readers know all the devil fruits so it should be fine. (There’s already a lust devil fruit that Lilith had so it’s possible.) There are a lot of words to start off with some being insanely strong. You should decide if you want the story to end quickly or to keep it going. If you want to end it quickly then just send him to an op world and get him to get stronger and reach The top in one go. If you want to drag it out a bit, then get him to travel through different worlds and spend a few years in each to get the highest powers, plus a girl or two. Plus get the god to him and his girls a few hundred years per world conquered or just outright make him immortal and let him enjoy the travel between worlds. Put like a pier restriction for his friends and family to enter the new world. Like have to have IM’s strength level or Hagoromo’s strength to enter the Naruto world. If by this time or any other time you get bored writing, either just drop it or write the best scenes of each world. If at any time you want to finish up, just say that Seth got strong enough to hide his world from every other influence, and lived happily ever after. Maybe a short story about his wives and kids later on. I have more ideas but honestly I have no clue whether you’ll write up to this point or not, so we’ll see how it goes. If you need help just ask :)

This is the best novel I’ve ever read!!! Finally there’s someone who has the same idea as me that Dumbledore is an evil twisted f*ck. I hope this continues till the end of the original novel, and then he uses the wish from R.O.B when he dies to help out in other worlds as well. Cuz I’m assuming he’s not going to die before conquering the HP world. Anyway, keep up the amazing work :)

That was great If this could continue until he goes through the Naruto, Bleach and DBZ worlds, and maybe the strongest system, then the story would be epic :) Hope this still continues considering how awesome it’s been so far!!!