My Adventures In The Multiverse

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Rpglegend_74

I see no r-18 tag...this makes me sad😢.

LV 14

yokedjaguar

Theirs nothing good about this at all. Even if you like OP mc's, this has no plot. 10 chapters of nothing but him messing with the system, then when the story finally starts its him being a retard, everything is overly dramatic, this is going past wish fulfillment, this is an author that doesn't know what their doing and wanted the basic cliche bullsh*t of harem, system, and op. That's fine but when you do all that and don't add anything else that's your own besides a sprinkling of bad grammar your gonna get a nice serving of dog sh*t. May seem harsh but when you write a story you have to have at least the basics down and quite frankly I haven't even seen that. I hope if you write another story you think about what your gonna write, make it your own (even if it's terrible puns), your grammar is better, and you don't ride on every cliche to get a free pass to the top and if you do make it good not whatever this is.

LV 10

Antalo

This is basically everything i dislike about Wish fics in a nutshell its a terrible concept that more often then not leaves 50% of your readers feeling "well thats a dumb wish" or "well theres no story now hes too OP" im a firm advocate that if your giving you MC a power it must be something that he doesn't choose but has to make the best of Gamer is great for this allows diversity and the writer to develop at whatever pace is good for them, this fic however takes the 2nd wish example to its pinnacle with no character design, no real story development because in reality there is nothing that can challenge him, the only thing this gets 5 stars on is because its piggybacking off of a really well fleshed out series of story backgrounds thats it. In Summery - Terrible Story because plot dies in Ch-1, Terrible Character Development because there is flat out none I hope other Writers and the Author of this fic themselves understand what im trying to say when i say Wish fics note i do not mean "wish fulfillment" that is a totally different can of worms and can be accomplished by making it a challenging path but totally achievable, but my main point is yeah MC too powerful too quick and terrible plot and Character development

LV 14

Potato_daoist

Wish fulfillment trash litteraly first 10 chaps all in the system wish fulfillment trash.

LV 5

jeanpierregerardo

interesing. just the way you write it a little confusing, as I always read with dots, that way that you put a little that makes me dizzy, but still understandable, I have seen worse ways of how they put it xD.

LV 12

AntiWorldSystem

Even MC is totally over powered .. .but this novel is suck with MC attitude and character is like dogshit and fool and Fucking beta dogshit

LV 14

Sirrow

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LV 13

FBI_Field_Agent

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LV 3

DJDAN

Love it. Honestly I didnt get into this story with high expectations I only wanted to stave off my boredom but holy jesus I really enjoyed reading. Im not a person that looks for plot holes and Im not sensitive to those stuff so to me this is a flawless story that makes perfect sense (at least, I think it makes sense) give it a try, read.

LV 5

Onigami

I've already put it on the list to read more, I would like the auto put if a chapter helps with the MC's harem ,[img = atualização],

LV 4

JOKER_JAY

this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work

LV 3

Irysss_Novalin

TOO MUCHH UNREALISTIC but since youre died by truch kun i will give you 2.4 rating hohoho maybe truck kun going isekai me soon hehehehehehehe

Loved the story so far and how it makes me crack up in laughter when I read it, please more chapters you are doing a great job on this wonderful masterpiece 👍🏻

LV 13

HaremLoverKoneko

Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad. Just sad. Just sad. just sad.

LV 2

Nafsu_geass28

Is this a huge harem? Is this huge harem? please get a minimum of twenty girls Add to the harem.rias,akeno,sona,tsubaki,momo,yubeluna,asia,xenovia,ophis,raynare,ravel phenex,serafall,kuroka,koneko,shuri,lady phenex,venelana gremory,lady sitri,diodorath peerage,riser peerage,sona peerage

LV 4

Crimson_Ced

This is a great book and I recommended it to everyone but the thing is its extremely difficult to find a novel with a Powerhouse MC and it not contain romance or harem so when I saw this with neither of those tags I was like "YES, FUVK YES" but then as I was reading it started talking about romance stuff then eventually having kids which that is a "HUGE DEAL BREAKER" for me but other than that its great!

LV 10

loverofbeans

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LV 1

Ajibola_Adebayo_4407

Thought it was trash but started getting better after the first like 10 chapters I think. He should just get his signs right during the Next Novels he brings it if he ever is cause it seems he's going to use the signs like that, but I like a little change. So pls don't drop this novel it's pretty nice

LV 1

DaoistdqS04b

Personally I like the novel. I mean if you look past the first 4 or 5 Chapters, Cause it showed the Author is still a begginer you'll get a pretty decent story

LV 5

ahmed_waleed_1200

Thanks for your hard work so keep up and don't drop this story. Hope you post more chapte4s soon. Waiting for him to become more powerful and visit other worlds so keep up and don't drop this story and hope you post soon.