Cpt_Rumpel

3yr

Commented

Is this google translated? The walking man... Srly... Its WalkMan.. . . What for, its a nifty piece of tech but in this situation a sonorus charm is faster und more practicable.... I'm getting kind of mad with this drop in quality, at least it's over soon... Sad[img=faceslap]

"The barrier will soon fall," Professor McGonagall said quietly using the walking man" everyone you know your job"

Harry Potter (Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Nolifeking

Cpt_Rumpel

3yr

Posted

It started so good, it's awesome to read. .. Until you reach the chapters 115+ then the quality drops almost into a bottomless pit. The grammar is hideous ,it seems that another writer just took over and this new writer is like "srry engrich not my langutsch but letz me writ dis reeel quik once" the well developed flow of this story just gets a kick in the proverbial nuts(excuse my french)

Harry Potter (Fanfic)

Book&Literature · Nolifeking

Cpt_Rumpel

3yr

Commented

I love the story, but not the editing/grammar... Those need some work. There's so much confusing stuff because the sentences just don't make sense sometimes [img=update][img=update][img=update]

ch 138 Chapter 138: Snatchers