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follows Edwin Vaclav who found out that he is a wizard in harry potter world after being reincarnate after many years just thinking its an ordinary world
i don't own harry potter just my oc
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Horrible HP fan fic. Super rushed and MC insert horribly. This pretty much sums up this fic. :: I remember my past life. Found out I’m in HP universe. Went to school. Follow cannon story line. Got myself strong. Help beat the dark lord. Waste of time.
Love the book....👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.....keep it up....
Loved it it so good i finished 130 chapter in just one and half day it is so good thanks for the effort. ..................................................................
Update is often and the grammar isn't bad but the mc ia unlikeable and the story is not enjoyable, mc too beta at weird times( in order to push the story along and add needless conflict). The appeal of the story to moat of theae "great" reviews is how the mc doesnt care and will mess up cannon but thats not true, its the same as cannon just with extra dialogue and extra people involved(but not important)
Total trash....... To many mistakes..... 1 star is too much.... Horrible storyline......👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👏🏻👏🏻
It started so good, it's awesome to read. .. Until you reach the chapters 115+ then the quality drops almost into a bottomless pit. The grammar is hideous ,it seems that another writer just took over and this new writer is like "srry engrich not my langutsch but letz me writ dis reeel quik once" the well developed flow of this story just gets a kick in the proverbial nuts(excuse my french)
I'm sorry but this is just nonsensical without humour to make up for it. It's a dull tale which makes little sense and without interesting characters...the grammar isn't great either. Oh well, better find something else to read.
Simply, I liked this book. I would like to read more, so good job and continue to write. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Author can't write even grade school english and hasn't bothered to use grammarly or editor to fix his mistakes. World is copy paste harry potter world and you can't really tell anything about the mc as author hasn't given him any motivations, backstory or anything really. So i wouldn't recomend this to anybody.
Mc's annoying, and terrible english.....................................................................................................................
I really loved the story. I loved your idea and concept of the story. hopefully you keep up the great work and keep on making more stories.to bad this story had to come to an end.but keep on writing these great stories.
i enjoyed reading this........................................................................................................................
good 1 off the bes aim sad its finished but who cares if you look into it you see that our mc destroyed some of the horxlux and got item all in all its good(im very sad its over)
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From all the HP fictions, I appreciated this one most. It mixes between the reincarnation and original story. The writer created new and more logical story than original. I really like this version of Harry Potter story and I recommend it to other wn readers.
I like the devolment of the character and that he isn´t OP. I´m tired of the stories of "n" quantity of wishes or that The protagonist can already destroy the world in CH 10. The family plot is quite a good one and is a plus to the HP series.
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MC is a total pushover. And the plot of the story is so forced. 😩😩😩😩😩😩😒😒😒😒😒😖😖😖😖😖😖😖👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
It's a good novel.waiting for more chapters .story development is good and new not focusing mainly around Hatty Potter. lot of fanfiction have already appeared where person born as Harry. Thanks to the author who made it different
well the writing is good ... the only problem is the plot , not just me but almost everyone who is reading self insert fanfiction is reading because the writer creates the good enough hook to make the readers want more .. when you have good enough plot idea and make the novel totally unpredictable and exciting the novel gets more views and 😂😂😂 people out to kill you because you update too slow and the mc should do this or that... i have read fanficting even in mtl just because the plot was so much exciting....
The Mc wanted to go to Hufflepuff and was going to drop but thank the lord he isn’t a complete b*tch and ended up there... like the story so far hope to see where it goes! Keep it up!
ch 17 I dont find anything good about the plot yet. Other than his suppose to be rebirth nothing special about him nor did he do anything great about his knowledge of the future.----------------------------------------------------------