Webnovel Author: Bartelemys - Novel Collection

Bartelemys

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Bartelemys
Replied to MaitreRahl

I am not sure about that. To me the concept of plot armour is all about a character surviving a deadly situation that they shouldn't have without sufficient explanation. In that aspect, Supreme Magus succeeds as I never thought Lith should have died after a fight, or felt cheated in any way. People use the "plot armour" as a criticism of story these days, it's so lazy.

'What the heck is this? The set of the Texas chainsaw massacre? Why do I always stumble into hornet's nests?' Lith had already lost his patience. The situation was a waste of time for him. He only wanted to reach the ruins and learn as much from them as he could.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to MaitreRahl

Preach, same age and situation.

'I need to get ahold of that damn book.' She thought.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to QUANTUM_ETGOD

I know what those two mean, I just wasn't seeing the connection with the subject. The absence of proper punctuation didn't help.

Lith put them straight inside Soluspedia, discovering that one was a book about common words and the second was solely about the magical jargon.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Ahren

Dude, you're so late on this one, I asked my question more than a year ago and I haven't read Supreme Magus since.

It would require a couple of Eldritch Abominations to get past the wards, but by the time they succeeded, the family would have been relocated and the security increased.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to DaoistFCWsMR

True enough. Although that doesn't detract from my point, does it ?

"Most of the applicants get rejected. In the past, when such knowledge was publicly available, there had been countless suicides among the youths that either couldn't bear the pressure or handle the failure.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Bartelemys
Replied to halloween20

It sounds silly, and I love it.

"Perfect. Now that you've grasped the easy part of Light Mastery, let's move to the real challenge." Nalrond said, resuming his explanation while one of the snake heads took notes and the other three gave him their full attention.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to halloween20

True, Xedros doesn't have a great reputation.

"I am a Healer!" Friya felt insulted at those words. "I'm not an Awakened like Lith nor a genius like Quylla, but I mastered all the light magic known to man. My drive is not knowledge, so I had no reason to pursue research in the Body Sculpting field, just like Lith did.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to halloween20

True. In short, it's more complicated than it seems.

"Well, that's true," She accepted the compliment but she also didn't like to hog all the glory. Both her sisters needed a victory. "Dimensional magic is amazing. That's why it's usually sealed first, but don't forget that it does no damage by itself.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to halloween20

Come on, it wasn't that bad.

The siblings were twins, both with the red hair of their father and the green eyes of their mother. Seeing them reminded the Verhens about Orpal, Rena's disowned twin brother, and made their cheery mood turn sour. 

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to halloween20

I'm not dense enough not to see a joke, yet I'll still point out that if you suffocate because of a corset, you put it on wrong. It shouldn't be tight. Have a nice day.

"We're headed to the city of Palaron, in the Gorgon Empire. The Griffon Kingdom is off-limits because both the Bright Day and the Black Night have been sighted there. The security is tighter than a corset and there are too many big players in the game.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Tridec

I don't understand what you mean. What Salaark said is true : in this situation, within a meeting of the council, normal humans are irrelevant. Whether she is interested about Orion or not has nothing to do with the matter at hand. Good day.

"No matter how much you cared for him, Lark was a non-Awakened human and you are a beast who's insulting his own bloodline. There's a big difference. As for Captain Yehval, unless you bring her into your nest and she gives you children, she's irrelevant as well." Salaark shook her head.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Bartelemys
Replied to darkestkhan

I don't remember that detail, but even if he does, they come from Lith and not his business. Good day.

"Zekell is a great craftsman and a shameless merchant, yet he doesn't have a communication amulet nor a dimensional item." Tista pointed at the luxury goods that Orpal so casually flaunted.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Dandroid

Yeah, I know. The author is pretty clunky in his writing, but it's clear that here he is talking about the students that dropped out.

The class had gone down from thirty-four to twenty-eight students, and some of them had barely broken a C. Between those who had lost a friend and the ones terrified at the idea of suffering the same fate, very few were in the mood for celebration.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
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You guys are spouting nonsense : this is no typo, and Elina is currently hugging his ankles.

"Nonsense. I'm sure that with two life forces you can get even taller." From her worried tone, one would think that Lith was short for his age instead of being already 20 centimeters (8') taller than her.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Nate_Gardea

I am pretty sure Threin turned into an abomination and died right in front of Silverwing, Menadion and Solus. Hard to ignore.

'I'm a frigging mess. On the one hand, I'm happy that at least one member of my family is still alive and that she's willing to go to such lengths to help me. On the other hand, I want to kill aunt Loka for what she said about us and what she tried to do.' She replied.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Nate_Gardea

Solus's father ? Wasn't it just onfirmed that he died right in front of three witnesses ?

'I'm a frigging mess. On the one hand, I'm happy that at least one member of my family is still alive and that she's willing to go to such lengths to help me. On the other hand, I want to kill aunt Loka for what she said about us and what she tried to do.' She replied.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Nate_Gardea

What ?

'I'm a frigging mess. On the one hand, I'm happy that at least one member of my family is still alive and that she's willing to go to such lengths to help me. On the other hand, I want to kill aunt Loka for what she said about us and what she tried to do.' She replied.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Bartelemys
Replied to Whimsikun

They put his body in a storage ring before going to fight Nalear, which would have been absolutely impossible if he wasn't dead. Good day.

His attempt to use Yurial's death to solicit sympathy made every parent in the room want to puke and put Kwart in a bad spot.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

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