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ch 0 3 Growth was the answer?
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Nah more of a convincing from Krillin and peer pressure from Davion to get her to do this
"Good, you two look ready for battle." Davion said. Chi Chi and Maron were wearing similar clothing. They wore Davion's gi but fitted for their size. He had spares of these because of Shoena. On them were 100 kilograms worth of weighted clothing. Their wristbands, shoes, and over shirt were all 20 kilograms each.
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I’m glad you like it😁 makes me happy and want to publish twice a week at least
ch 0 5 Reality is Family
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What if I already did the at in the next chapter?
"Krillin training more must one of the change in the timeline. I hope he gets with Android 18, Maron is just playing with his heart for her enjoyment. Makes me want to break her."
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I didn’t know how to properly respond to the comment
"Krillin training more must one of the change in the timeline. I hope he gets with Android 18, Maron is just playing with his heart for her enjoyment. Makes me want to break her."
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🥺
"Krillin training more must one of the change in the timeline. I hope he gets with Android 18, Maron is just playing with his heart for her enjoyment. Makes me want to break her."
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Never😈
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Thanks[img=recommend]
It’ ebonics, I speak like this irl a lo of times and so do a lot of my friends. The way someone speaks in Ebonics depend on where they are
"If you ain't gon tell me then who you gon tell?"
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YOu see it as low quality when it’s just a way of speaking
"If you ain't gon tell me then who you gon tell?"
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That’ apart of his mannerism. Alabama isn’t the only place that speaks like that
"If you ain't gon tell me then who you gon tell?"
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I just thought that this bit was funny also I love your critique
"LEAVE MY BLOOD ALONE!!" Krillin yelled out at the top of his lungs. Krillin didn't like the idea of Vampires actually existing. In a universe where aliens, Bearmen, dinosaurs and mystical BALLS!! The idea of vampires actually existing is terrifying to him.
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Ye I went and fixed that because thinking back on it. I think Bulma would’ve helped her father get out of a stage like that a while ago
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I was told that her mom was replaced by a robot that looked like her so that’ misinformation on my points
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She’s chillin at capsule corps as well
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I understand that
shoena has a tomboy personality so she'd bother a woman as if she was a man. Thats why I put big sister little brother
Bulma wasn't that accepting of another lover of Davion at first and Shoena only saw Bulma as a rival. She thought Bulma was another weak and entitled woman. That was until Shoena went to Caspule Corporation for the first time. It was the first time she learned that "Being strong isn't just physical". So she highly respects Bulma after that and tries to get along with her in her own way. They kinda have a Big Sister Little Brother relationship(Ya know how the little brother annoys the older sister just for the fun of it. That's how Shoena is to Bulma.) Overtime, they got along just fine.
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