Webnovel Author: Jim_Odette_D - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Latest Author's Announcement Contains Spoilers. Read at your discretion. A lot of readers, especially during the first few chapters in the first volume have all valid criticism about plot holes and characters that are doing or acting in ways that are not in ‘character’ for good example: a korpsman that is not silent and too suicidal. But the thing is that Masha’s character has been explained why she acts and thinks in such an unorthodox way compared to her peers, and it is because in her flashback that happened very far down into the story that she had an encounter with an Inquisitor and was inducted to the Inquisition’s party - although temporarily - the readers can then assume and fill in the gaps that she learned or was taught stuff during her time with the Inquisitor. Following such an event possibly happening, it is only reasonable to think that Masha has learned things or been taught things only to a certain degree and does not know all of it, and basically just the gist of it. So any mistakes that she carelessly and recklessly did such as speak of the names of the Chaos Gods, you can say it was a poor decision on her part. I like to tell my story without dropping their backstory in just a single chapter, I drop it like crumbs and use it to angle their character to the current. I mean, they had lives before the story began so it is logical to think that something at least surprising or out of place happened in their life.

Thanks for the review! Oh, and so long as you put the story in your library any update in the future should notify you! The story may not update frequently, but I intend to finish any stories I have begun! :)

Here's what you can expect, simply based on the author's own review. Writing Quality - Grammers and Spelling are checked before publishing, and, the dialogues are easily distinguishable between 'inner monologue.' and "interaction monologue." Lastly, decent pacing on the paragraphs. Stability of Updates - At most it will follow a schedule of one chapter every month, maybe two or three if lucky. But otherwise, it will update from time to time. (Don't worry if I don't update it. It's not going to be an abandoned work. Just in a hiatus state. Like many of my stories.) Story Development - It follows the progress of the story and any factors are taken into consideration and have consequences in each action. So, it can be expected that 'what goes around, comes around.' in this story. Character Design - The story follows Estelle, and a supporting character - the Tribunus; Numerius - as both character and their legion travel the world of Middle Earth. However, more characters can be implemented from the legions, like a Centurion if the plot requires it. Otherwise, the sole protagonist is Estelle. Further elaboration. Estelle is a prime example of a civilized person, and that she is virtuous and noble. But not generous nor kind, though not cruel or sadistic. In other terms, she is logical and reasonable within reason. World Background - Set in the Second Age, and to be specific; it is based on the show before the Trilogy of, The Lord of the Rings. The Lord of the Rings: The Rings of Power.