I adore poetry to the point of dying; I love romances, and comedy. I want to get better at writing so I will take every opinion seriously. That said feel free to talk to me, and judge my writing.
2020-07-31 Joined United States
will fix, thanks for the tid bit
"Sorry, I'm just super excited you see..." While Jishi began machine-gunning words with a skip in his step. I began fidgeting with the controller of my implant that lied in the right pocket of my black pants. Maxing and muting my hearing, attempting to ignore at least 50% of Jishi's infinite volley. Burstin out in internal laughter, I continue for a few minutes. Until he realised what I was doing and used sign language to relay the words. Tears crawled up to my eyes as one thought crossed my mind, "Damn it".
Realistic · Half_Boiled_Man
Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words.
yes but not that hard core of a fan
A nervous voice leaves the piano in D sharp, as an ominous adagio lurks around the room. "I'm scared" it cried elegantly and fearfully. Steadily tuning up into an allegro, after which I forgot where I was. I played the piano in 2/4 times, once again wrestling Beethoven for his words. "Les adieux" resounded in the room, its voice turning to one of bliss as a smile crawled up my lips.
Realistic · Half_Boiled_Man
The story seems intriguing. A million crossroads come to mind by the end of the prologue. While I would've liked more details on the castle, I think its a pretty good starting line. I will keep reading so please keep writing.
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Fantasy · AGirlHasNoName20
While the atmosphere was quite tragic I think its pretty good. But some more imagery in regards to the funeral wpuld have been great. Regardless keep it up.
ch 0 9 In a Struggle and a Visit from a Half Human Being
War · ASG_Official
I think your doing a great job at hyping up the mysteries keep it up.
ch 0 8 It All Came Back and Scouting
War · ASG_Official
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.
This story is genuinely good. Characters are engaging and interesting. While the theme may come off as overused. Its pulled off in a unique way. The different point of views provided give you a really good understanding of the story. All in all, props to tge author good job.
Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life
Urban · sagorika_adhikari