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Vellon Online is the number one VRMMO game on the market. The opinions are highly polarizing on love and hate, but even the ones who hate it still play.
Locke is a poverty stricken youth who trades everything he owns for a VR headset to play Vellon Online. However, reality is cruel. After the first week of playing he realizes something.
He sucks at the game! Unwilling to give up he continues to grind for money until one day when he unlocks a hidden class!
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the story seems great, as per usual. pill_guy is really good at these sorts of things. good grammar and managing of the system as well. the story seems to have been dropped but other than that i would recommend giving this a read
While its still early I'm quite liking the story so far. The main character while not the kindest person is still likeable. And the world building is pretty good. The system of how the world works isn't confusing at all which adds to the entretainment of it. Quite excited to see how this will turn out.
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So I read the story so far, I like the concept that our MC sucks at the game and had died 999 times (to get it right like how our MC mentions). I find the writing quality to be good, nothing too obvious to nit-pick and by far the pace is cool and the world development is alright. The character design seems justified. So, I'll add this story to my library to see its progress.
The writing quality is good and there isn't any grammar and in fact, it actually enthralls u into the story and wanting to read more. I instantly fell in love with this novel in the first chapter, with how 'alive' the characters feel in their interactions, and the descriptions are amazing. The story development is superb with it paced in a way that doesn't seem too slow nor too fast just the right rhythm. The world background is also nice with it being introduced in snippets that don't feel like an info dump. Overall I give it an 8.5/10 reading experience and personal enjoyment 9/10.