Webnovel Author: Kayle_ezel - Novel Collection

This is not really interesting and I can't continue as the MC is just too annoying and ML is so stereotypical. Really a bunch of clichés and not really good story building or characters.

I like it and appreciate it isn't cliché guideverse as well as the fact your main character is a high standing person who it would make sense to be favored and have random good things happen instead of like random person A gets a chance at a position they normally can't get.

I read the whole thing on another site before you contracted I believe so I think you may need to check if they took it down or not but I like it and loved the fact that it isn't just happy ever after but realistic on the fact just one person going to the past can only do so much even if they find a cure it needs time to be spread and deaths will continue for a long time still due to instability and other threats. The world has completely changed and even a cure can't undo that.

I only read the non pay part but it was nice and I liked the plot and hints at trouble to come from the beginning along with the MC and ML. I hope you keep this up through the rest and it seems so from the other reviews.

He is because you are better then the two stars he gave to another book so he must like something of yours over there's.

It is so far beautiful work and very unique even though it is a transmigration I like this aspect of have to do a job so was transmigrated along with the way you tell the story and the hints of trouble are perfect I love this work. Although not my forte as I am not a big transmigration person anymore I still can appreciate a nice work in this genre.

Very generic transmigration to the future along with guideverse but I love the characters and the fact the romance isn't just love at first sight like many are here or even based on him being a guide, so it truly is a fun story but I have to take off points for the very much cliché only unique because transmigration and the usual path most stories like this take being the same but over all a favored for me in this category much better then most. I have fallen out of transmigration and realized it a unfair thing for the protagonist they get for no reason, if they like save thousands in there last life the understandable but no just randomly the one that got to keep there memory or slip through to another world. They didn't earn it but lucked into it makes me somewhat angry and does tent my view on stories so take this with a grain of salt.

How do I edit reviews or can I only delete them, also I write on this site as well and it precisely because of this I am telling you this to prevent you from potentially missing this.

Ok I see this isn't what I had thought but change the introduction to something that doesn't sound like ORV and make the transmigration more prevalent in the description or you will get other who get my confusion. Also not quite my cup of tea but interesting none the less I will keep it in my library for a day I am bored and the other haven't updated.

I'm going to not go to high or low on myself so please help increase that number if you like it. Now please comment if any problem or critiques as I will adjust as this is my first writing attempt. I am currently very motivated to write but often fail to catch awkward phrasing or sentences that make sense when I write them but not quite when read altogether I will slowly alter and adjust it as I reread and fix up any problems. I may go long periods with no updates or rapid updates it depends on how I feel and my current motivation. This will be sporadic and I know many people may dislike that, I will do my best to not drop this but I make no promises, I currently am Writing this on the fly with little planning other than a general wish for what I want in it. This is written purely as a this is what I like to read but nothing quite fits so might as well write it myself. chapters are currently small but will expand as more events occur and will need more details added. The romance in this will take a long time and the male lead will most likely not appear for a while so do not expect large romance as I did not add the romance tag for a reason. After all that please write your current thought and expectations in the novel chapter or review section and I thank you for looking at my most likely butchered first writing attempt.

Please continue this is supper fun and interesting!! I hope you don't permanently hiatus this way to many good ones lost that way. I'm now just trying to fill in the review numbers so as to post this.