/ Fantasy / Dungeon jumper [bl]
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In 2000 humanity underwent drastic changes when tunnels appeared, humans began awakening and with this awakening the trials pulled all those who awakened in to learn as quickly as possible how to use there new found energy to defend themselves. Because of the harsh conditions caused by rapid evolution of everything in the world humans had to fight for everything and all humans have a status they must fill.
Aadi originates from an unawakened home as the oldest born only 5 years after the tunnels appeared, humans to try and increase standing have as many children as they can to try and hit on the chance of even one of their children being a high awakener, he has 10 younger siblings and low potential started working as a farmer at the base they live at the age of five while also cleaning up and looking after his younger siblings while his parents never bother with any except the youngest who had high potential at birth. They gave basic nutrients packs, water, and clothes while they live in a crowded three bedroom apartment when a tunnel appears in the middle of the field while working one day causing him to be dragged in. Fortunately it was the lowest slime dungeon, unfortunately he was knocked unconscious when being dragged in and buried under dirt that also poured in by the time he woke the awakened had already closed the tunnel leaving him stuck in another world.
This is my first attempt at a story please tell me of any mistakes, incongruencies or grammar problems as well as your honest opinion on the concept.
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I'm going to not go to high or low on myself so please help increase that number if you like it. Now please comment if any problem or critiques as I will adjust as this is my first writing attempt. I am currently very motivated to write but often fail to catch awkward phrasing or sentences that make sense when I write them but not quite when read altogether I will slowly alter and adjust it as I reread and fix up any problems. I may go long periods with no updates or rapid updates it depends on how I feel and my current motivation. This will be sporadic and I know many people may dislike that, I will do my best to not drop this but I make no promises, I currently am Writing this on the fly with little planning other than a general wish for what I want in it. This is written purely as a this is what I like to read but nothing quite fits so might as well write it myself. chapters are currently small but will expand as more events occur and will need more details added. The romance in this will take a long time and the male lead will most likely not appear for a while so do not expect large romance as I did not add the romance tag for a reason. After all that please write your current thought and expectations in the novel chapter or review section and I thank you for looking at my most likely butchered first writing attempt.
Man I started reading this with no expectations at all but what a surprise, a truly nice and engaging story. Had lots of fun reading it.