I really like your book
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
What a unique name for a dragon.
"Then, my mate, we have a pretty daughter, Zavi." Zavi? Is that my name now?"
Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
Nice, it would be cool if you could add the perspective of the main character. From what I've read she and baby dragons so everything around her must be rather large. If you know what I mean. But very good, love the plot.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
It would make more sense if you said "I took deep gulps of sharp, cold air" Instead of using the word "sharply" To me anyway, it makes more sense.
Huh…? I lay in the dark, feeling as if I was underwater. Where am I...oh, that's right. I died. I...drowned, right? I'm not too sure how I died. So is this the afterlife? I tried to open my eyes and found they were sealed with some sort of gel-like substance. Hm? Now that I think about it, it feels like I have four arms and...a tail? I moved around a bit and found myself stuck inside of something. What's this? Am I not dead? A bright flare of light flashed over my closed eyelids and I suddenly wanted nothing more than to beat at the smooth thing around me. There was a loud cracking sound when I slammed my head against it, the pressure around me beginning to disappear. What seemed to be thick fluid carried me out of a hole, my body barely slipping through. I gasped for air but found a weird film was completely covering me. I tried to pull it off, my hands slipping each time. Why can't I get a grip?! It's so slimy! When it finally tore I took deep gulps of sharply cold air.
Fantasy · DragonArtist3D
I agree loved the greedy chick's
ch 31 End of the Crisis
Eastern · Suiyan
Wait thats it wait happens next, the cliff hanger. I have so many questions.
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Fantasy · vallendark
thanks for the chapter, can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Fantasy · vallendark
I wonder what significance the water prison has to the character.
ch 30 This is not fair!
Eastern · Suiyan
damn why the cliff hanger, well gotten keep reading now.
ch 0 1 Take me there
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Confusing, but I agree
ch 27 They Won't Steal Him!
Eastern · Suiyan
hmmm
ch 0 2 Chapter 2 The Down-and-Out Female City Lord
Eastern · Chaos (Fish's Sky)
What happens next!?
ch 34 I am...
Draconic Reincarnation
Fantasy · DragonArtist3D