Webnovel Author: JenniferdeBruyn

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

What happens next!?

ch 34 I am...

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Posted

I love the story and the characters, and I am certainly waiting for the next chapter or part. But I have been waiting a very long time and am starting to lose hope that there will be a next part.

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Replied to _Neith_

Me too

ch 11 Chapter 11

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

I really like your book

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Posted

A very entertaining story with my favorite mythical creatures. The plot is fun and the world is very creative. I can't wait to see how the story develops.

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

Wow

ch 0 3 Chapter 3

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

What a unique name for a dragon.

"Then, my mate, we have a pretty daughter, Zavi." Zavi? Is that my name now?"

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

Nice, it would be cool if you could add the perspective of the main character. From what I've read she and baby dragons so everything around her must be rather large. If you know what I mean. But very good, love the plot.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

It's not a bad start. Very entertaining but could use a little bit more editing. Some spots didn't quite make sense with the word choices and punctuation. But I can't wait to see what happens next.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

2yr

Commented

It would make more sense if you said "I took deep gulps of sharp, cold air" Instead of using the word "sharply" To me anyway, it makes more sense.

Huh…? I lay in the dark, feeling as if I was underwater. Where am I...oh, that's right. I died. I...drowned, right? I'm not too sure how I died. So is this the afterlife? I tried to open my eyes and found they were sealed with some sort of gel-like substance. Hm? Now that I think about it, it feels like I have four arms and...a tail? I moved around a bit and found myself stuck inside of something. What's this? Am I not dead? A bright flare of light flashed over my closed eyelids and I suddenly wanted nothing more than to beat at the smooth thing around me. There was a loud cracking sound when I slammed my head against it, the pressure around me beginning to disappear. What seemed to be thick fluid carried me out of a hole, my body barely slipping through. I gasped for air but found a weird film was completely covering me. I tried to pull it off, my hands slipping each time. Why can't I get a grip?! It's so slimy! When it finally tore I took deep gulps of sharply cold air.

Draconic Reincarnation

Fantasy · DragonArtist3D

JenniferdeBruyn

3yr

Replied to Jackalope

I agree loved the greedy chick's

ch 31 End of the Crisis

Is that a Wisp?

Eastern · Suiyan

JenniferdeBruyn

3yr

Posted

The story is very entertaining and I am very interested in finding out what happens next in the upcoming chapters. I also can't wait see how the main character develops throughout her adventure.